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camaronzin June 15 2008, 22:24:09 UTC

T lo vuelvo a decir!!

Ame tu fic!!!... ahi lo tengo tdv.. jejeje

Lo e leido muchas veces!!

T.T

ta lindo!!

Cuídate.

Byes

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anjin_no_sekai June 15 2008, 22:44:42 UTC
De verdá q me alegra que te haya gustado ^w^

Y respecto a lo otro.. Es q soy maniática con esas cosas ^^

No te preocupes... Ya pasó ^^

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darkscytherv June 16 2008, 00:51:22 UTC
hehehe... it somehow felt like toma was the hubby and pi was a jealous wife! hmmm.. really cute though...

thanks for sharing this! good job!

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anjin_no_sekai June 16 2008, 01:05:02 UTC
hahahaha...

Tomo was really like a wife ne? xD Poor Toma xD

I'm glad you found it cute <3

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anonymous June 16 2008, 07:05:57 UTC
I would have liked it more if I didn't have to figure out what you were trying to say. Next time get a beta reader.

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anjin_no_sekai June 16 2008, 12:39:17 UTC
Such a bad global coherence o.o??? xDDDDD

Soka... Maybe the Maki part? o.o

Mmmm... Would you explain it more to me?? I would like to get exactly what you meant by "have to figure out what you were trying to say" oO

You mean the story? Didn't you get the whole thing?
Was the "thinking of sth and talking another thing" difficult to follow?
Or my mistake, coz I never wrote when they stopped the car xD?
Or maybe, is it an English grammar problem?

You're from the States ne? ^^ Coz your IP oO
-BTW, why an anonymous comment? xD-
Maybe... it was too unnatural for a native speaker of English
-Me and the only person who read before I posted are Spanish-speaking people oO.

It would be nice to know exactly what you meant, so that I can judge whether it is something I did on purpose or not and have it in mind if there's a next time ^^

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youhou ~ yoichi_reno June 16 2008, 13:54:25 UTC
I like your fic! ^^
It's the first time that I read a English fic, and I've every understand! youhou ~
I'm happy ^^

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Re: youhou ~ anjin_no_sekai June 16 2008, 18:15:13 UTC
Congrats!! <3

And I'm glad you liked it <3

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ayusan June 16 2008, 17:22:55 UTC
Mouahahaha you got a comment from a sexually frustrated *rofl* or just mentally retarded o-O

See .... when I say human are shit and pitiful ^w^ plus if xmexxxxx >.>

Anyway I find it so cute >o< in a good way of course !!!

Hehe I'm writing too but I need no beta reader I AM PERFECT *sun glasses*

Post more and don't cheat on me =o=

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anjin_no_sekai June 16 2008, 18:18:24 UTC
xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I didn't really mind the comment itself... People may think whatever they want, but what I didn't like was that it was an anonymous comment

If s/he hadn't wanted to be harsh, then... why nn??

Makes no sense ¬¬

But blah... Now I have to worry 'bout a class, so I have no time for that person **glasses on** xDDDDD

Luv ya, wife *O*

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ayusan June 16 2008, 19:19:20 UTC
I don't see the point to leave a comment like this, people are too bored or what o-O ..... if only it could be nice and with advice but no, it is there just to be harsh and stupid, plus no guts .... anonymous .... lol

Kyo pop up to my eyes of course *O*

Yeah do not lose time with that ... hehe we will make a group with you, Ryu and I ... the rockstar wearing sun glasses <3

I will maybe post my "story" on a lj I own since age but used only to test graphic, actually the actual graphic is shit lol

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anjin_no_sekai June 16 2008, 18:20:16 UTC
PS: There are only "Toma Ikuta's Avis" except your Kyo

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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