FIC: slow & steady (Atobe/Oshitari, NC-17)

[anjenue]

Title: slow & steady
Author: Anj (anjenue)
Pairing: Atobe/Oshitari
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5000
Summary: In which Atobe is frustrated, Yuushi is intemerate, and Hiyoshi just wants everyone to shut up.
A/N: Written for meganebucks's weekly challenge #2. This week's theme: turtles. Thank you to jazzy_peaches for putting up with my 1AM wibbling. XD ♥

Comments

[_sabriel]

I like this a lot. I don't often read Atobe/Oshitari fics, but this was really good. I found the fact Atobe asked Jirou for help to be really funny for some reason. ^^

[anjenue]

I always love it when someone steps out of their comfort zone to read one of my fics and ends up liking it. Thank you for giving it a chance! :D

[ch_ar_me]

OH MY ANJ. WHY DO YOUR FICS KEEP ON DOING THIS TO ME? *____*

I needed a fic to read tonight, something different (to distract me), and here you are with an Atobe/Oshitari that I wouldn't normally touch with a pole-not because I don't like the pair, but...they're just side characters in my (currently almost non-existent, I admit) POT fandom. They're not that solid characters for me to go read a fic featuring only them.

BUT OF COURSE YOU MADE IT WORK. ♥

Anj, I seriously couldn't believe this had virginal-shy-about-sex!Oshitari. AND YOU PULLED IT OFF SO WELL. JASDHLAKJS ILUSM.

I love the random details, like Hiyoshi and his amazing shower skillz and the ninja!ShishiTori. The Random Capitalized Words For Atobe's Expressions. I was so amused upon the movie choice, and how Atobe was actually so engrossed watching it, with Yuushi turning predatory (ah yes! The Oshitari we know and love! XD).

he didn't want to be in a relationship that was All Sex, All The TimeWTF OSHITARI ARE YOU INSANE? If it was Atobe, who wouldn't want to? *dies

[anjenue]

You seriously always leave the best comments ever. ♥♥♥

As fun as canon representations of all the PoT characters can be, I love trying something different, and it was amazing how well these two lent themselves to what I was trying to do with them. I think I can almost see unsure!Atobe and cautious!Yuushi more than I can absolute!Atobe and sexmeister!Yuushi. Somehow all the details manage to work out even if I hadn't started off intending them that way - I don't understand the way my mind works, but I am glad it does! XD

♥♥♥

Ah, yes, it's an expression. I've seen it most often in relation to the military or to boarding schools, where a transgressor is directed to drop trou and bend over so he can be appropriately punished. But I like to use obscure words/phrases anyway. :D

[zoesque]

OH GEEZ. :|

I have just spent the last free five minutes I have left before having to run off to class reading this frantically, and while my ACTUAL comment (no more coherent, I promise, than this one) will have to wait until I return, I wanted to say QUICKLY:

DFADFK HANDJOBS ON THE COUCH ;ASFKLDJ OSHITARI WHO TOTALLY KNOWS HIS RETICENT IS CREATING PROBLEMS BUT IS STILL CONFIDENT ENOUGH TO STICK TO HIS GUNS UNTIL HE CHANGES HIS OWN DAMN MIND, THX AARGH AND AND TEAM COMMENTARY OH HYOUTEI MY BOOOYYYSSSS. *_*

TBC.

[anjenue]

Ahahahaha! :DDDD Capslocked incoherence is my favourite kind of feedback ever. Thank you so much! ♥

[daisy_chan]

heeee! This was fabulous. I love how your Oshitari is waiting for something more and Atobe just... doesn't get it. and then snuggling XDD
I do sort of wonder how that initial conversation went "WHAT DO YOU KNOW, YOU'RE NOT A SEX MACHINE???"

<3

[anjenue]

Atobe sees a lot, but he has a hard time Seeing. Good thing Yuushi likes to take things slow, eh? XD

♥

[jazzy_peaches]

♥

And see it is still awesome even by the light of day. XD

I think you ultimately pulled off the name change thing very well, btw.

[anjenue]

You are made of win. I hope you are aware of this.