FIC: slow & steady (Atobe/Oshitari, NC-17)

[anjenue]

Title: slow & steady
Author: Anj (anjenue)
Pairing: Atobe/Oshitari
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5000
Summary: In which Atobe is frustrated, Yuushi is intemerate, and Hiyoshi just wants everyone to shut up.
A/N: Written for meganebucks's weekly challenge #2. This week's theme: turtles. Thank you to jazzy_peaches for putting up with my 1AM wibbling. XD ♥

Comments

[venivincere]

Oh, I really enjoyed this! I love that Oshitari is known as a sex god but that he secretly wasn't, and I love, too, that Jiroh gives advice to Atobe about how to treat his 'girl'. For all he's sleepy, he still knows what's going on. :-) Nice work!

[anjenue]

Jirou is totally a genius. It's a good thing he's there, or else the team would totally fall apart at the seams. XD

Thank you so much, Veni! ♥

[aoiyuzu]

mmm mutual handjobs... *___* I love sex-god Yuushi is still a virgin. XD Jiroh giving Atobe relationship advice makes me laugh. :D This was so cute and hot at the same time. <3<3

[anjenue]

I love it when they're twits. :D Thank you, honey!

[polyurethane]

WIN.

♥

[anjenue]

:D ♥

[geeksicle]

OH MAN. *____*

This was really hot and kind of sweet. Loooooove.

[anjenue]

Heehee! Thank you very much!

[ataraxistence]

I am slain. I think your portrayal of both of them here is brilliant, how it's a fumbling teenage relationship and both of them are so insecure and unsure and it's so real. Brilliant. >D

I'm definitely hoping to see more. =D

[anjenue]

This is my favourite dynamic for them, the awkwardness I mean, so I'm sure there will be much more of it in the future. :D Thank you very much!