Broken Promises, chapter 4

Apr 06, 2010 16:04

Title: Broken Promises

Pairing: Ryopi, Koki/Jin

Genre: Angst, Romance

Rating: pg-13

Warnings: mpreg

Summary: Yamapi and Ryo have been together for 4 years already. One misunderstanding leads to many more problems. Can they overcome these obstacles and get back together?
Two updates in two days:D
i just couldnt stop writing^-^

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koki/jin, multichap, pg-13, ryopi

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massu16 April 6 2010, 20:26:24 UTC
Jin is like a protective older brother. Makes me like him even more.
Hope Ryopi can work through their problems soon.

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massu16 April 6 2010, 20:27:09 UTC
I'm first. Yay! That doesn't happen to often.

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animefantasyx3 April 6 2010, 20:36:59 UTC
haha. i hope so too~
im still thinking about how i should write chapter 5 :/

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massu16 April 6 2010, 23:17:26 UTC
Just go with it. I do. ^.^"
But I will wait patiently.

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anayid_kid April 6 2010, 21:06:11 UTC
me too.. i hope they can handle this problem soon...
seems like ryo will be more vulnerable bcoz he's preg soon right...
hope he has more strength and faith in pi..

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animefantasyx3 April 7 2010, 01:20:21 UTC
haha. maybe~

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praia06 April 6 2010, 21:09:55 UTC
aaaaaw i'm gonna read. i'm gonna read.. but after i finished my stupid report which is still bothering me...

so i'll come back tomorrow :)

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animefantasyx3 April 7 2010, 01:20:43 UTC
ROFL. have fun doing ur report^-^
ill cheer u on(:

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praia06 April 7 2010, 12:29:47 UTC
woah! i was kinda shocked when pi raped ryo, the love of his life... but now i'm all fine again reading lines like
"I doubt that I could save our relationship now. I broke all our promises.” Yamapi put his face into his hands and sighed."

or

"“Pi, I love you.” Ryo curled to his side and let a single tear roll on his cheek."

so, waiting for the next chap :)

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animefantasyx3 April 7 2010, 21:38:44 UTC
did u read chapter 3?
that was the rape part.
i posted this chapter the day after so maybe u didnt see the update :P

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cipherstar April 6 2010, 23:07:48 UTC
waaa..this chapter really broke my heart T.T Ryo~

“I'm so sorry Ryo. Please find a way to forgive me”
"Why did you do that to me? You promised that you would never do something like that."
->>noooo...they love each other sooo much that hating the other is like impossible..

I really2 hope Pi can fix this (haha put all the blame to a jealous Pi :P)

and what do we have here?
yayy!! baby Ryopi is otw!? ^__^

thanks for the fast update! XDDD

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animefantasyx3 April 7 2010, 01:22:02 UTC
urwelcome^-^
i just couldnt stop writing~
i have no idea how to write chap 5 x.x
it will prob come next week since springbreak is over for me already -___-
i hope u look forward to it~

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cipherstar April 7 2010, 03:27:19 UTC
of course!! ^__^

Ganbatte with the rest of the chapters XDDD

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yamasho April 7 2010, 01:47:51 UTC
vulnerable ryo is really make me hurt

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