Drowning-PG

[angryzen]

The scotch traveled down Damon’s stomach to mix with the pain, guilt, and resentment that churned there. He stared unseeingly into the fireplace, the only light in the entire mansion. He was home alone. Stefan always disappeared off to some place this time of year. He didn’t know where he went every time, but he knew he did not go to Elena.

His mind

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[skysamuelle]

you made it again - you left me speechless and teary-eyed

[angryzen]

You're so very welcome!

I didn't watch Buffy that much. I know she died, but I didn't know how the other characters reacted to it though I know Willow was the one who brought her back.

I wondered if I could write a Bamon story like this. I don't know if many exist where one of them is dead. I'm happy with how it came out though. And while writing, I did think about writing how the other characters dealt with it. You're right that it could turn into a multi-fic, and I think I might give it a shot. Don't hold your breath for it to come out soon though. Lol. Hint: I still plan on writing that sequel on The Wall of Separation, and look at how long that is taking. Lol. Plus, I have about three prompts from the Drabble party lined up to do.

I'm so happy you liked it though. I have to say I'm glad it broke your heart, because that is what I was going for. The song you used for the prompt is so beautiful, and I listened to it as I wrote.

[skysamuelle]

Well, Alta it make me happy only knowing that there's a slim chance of it turning into something more... I had even considered offering myself for a cowriting project before i remembered i have not the slightest idea of how those things work - this is how much i grew passionate about this story, in such a short time... to understand each other. ;)

Anyway, i love all your writing so knowing that you have so many projects in the way cheers me up majorly.

And i discovered that song by watching Gossip Girl, because i ship Chuck and Blair something fierce and it was used during one of their most epic scenes... in season 2, when they were still a beautifully tragic un-couple.

What i meant is, the prompt already kept great sentimental value, and you only added to that by writing this piece of utter, majestic awesomeness.

I'll be probably rereading it multiple times in the next days- it's that good, no arguing about it.

[angryzen]

I'm happy you love it that much! Wow! I'd love to work on a project with you. I think the way those works is someone writes one part and the other continues it with discussion of ideas and such. Anyways, I sent you back your fic with a question on Klaus.

[sana4eva]

OMGoodness, bb.. stunning, absolutely stunning!! Could see Stefan holding her, Jeremy going deathly pale or even see Elena ripping the ring from his hand, trying to keep it on Bonnies finger hoping that it would heal her as it had for her brother. Demanding Stefan or Damon to give her blood. Sobbing, when their silence told her it was much too late. :(
YOUR story, was so much better! Sooo many lines to quote :
It was amazing how much Mystic Falls had gone to shit in the two years that followed her death. The death toll of the town had climbed.
SO much! Without her holding the front line against the surge of killing sprees, Mystic would have burned long ago. How Damon and Stefan get the majority of credit over that one bullhockey statement "It's my town." I'll never know.

But these lines.. freaking AMAZING!!!
There were just long stretches of time where he despised them all because in the end they, who were supposed to be closer to her than he and who could get her to do anything while he could not, ended up knowing as much about

[angryzen]

Thank you so much, bb! I'm happy you liked it! Writing this story made me realize once again how much Bonnie does. She really is the problem solver. She's the one who does the important parts before the Salvatores come in with the muscle. Without her, so many people would be dead, because the Salvatores actually can't save everyone. Or most people for that matter.

[terrible_lina]

OMFG! I swear I was shivering all the while I was reading it. And then closer to the second half I started crying like a baby. Damnit! It's the saddest Bamon story I've ever read. EVER. God, still can't think clearly. Thank you so much for writing this.

[angryzen]

You're welcome! Shivering? That is such a big compliment, thank you!

It's the saddest most angsty Bamon story I've ever written.

[fiestyxgirlx18]

It was just so heart -tugging but beautiful written! I like how you show Damon POV like He say these on his mind based on Bonnie's death:(

[angryzen]

Thank you!

[1beaut]

I'm...lost for words. I really can't think of proper sentences right now, my mind is all over the place and so is my heart. You're making it want to break and I really don't want it to because that'll be messy LOL! Seriously this is heart wrenchingly amazing and depressing at the same time. I can't wait for the others you have lined up.

xoxoLove.Peace.&Bamon.

[angryzen]

Thank you!

Lol @ Love, Peace, and Bamon.