Drowning-PG

[angryzen]

The scotch traveled down Damon’s stomach to mix with the pain, guilt, and resentment that churned there. He stared unseeingly into the fireplace, the only light in the entire mansion. He was home alone. Stefan always disappeared off to some place this time of year. He didn’t know where he went every time, but he knew he did not go to Elena.

His mind

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[skysamuelle]

you made it again - you left me speechless and teary-eyed.

This reminded me very, very much of the general feeling of the first episode of season 6 of Buffy... when Willow was about secretly resurrecting the slayer a summer away from her death.I'm making up in my head the the Bonnie Damon has seen is somehow real and a version resurrected and mindcontrolled by Klaus.

And damn this setup is far too good to be left as a standalone, because you throw around so casually many intriguing points that might morph this scenario in addictive multichapter. There's the question of how Caroline and Elena and Stefan would react to a memoryless and breathing Bonnie, and how Damon would do with a second chance?

Again, this situation screams of Season 6 Spuffy - it should be written... but don't worry, i know i can't brainwash you into doing it. Can I?

Either way, I love, love, love the respect Damon has here for Bonnie's memory. I love how he kept everyone else from moving on - because they don't deserve to.
Thank you writing this piece that broke my hearth but i was also so poetic that could not bring myself to care.

[angryzen]

You're so very welcome!

I didn't watch Buffy that much. I know she died, but I didn't know how the other characters reacted to it though I know Willow was the one who brought her back.

I wondered if I could write a Bamon story like this. I don't know if many exist where one of them is dead. I'm happy with how it came out though. And while writing, I did think about writing how the other characters dealt with it. You're right that it could turn into a multi-fic, and I think I might give it a shot. Don't hold your breath for it to come out soon though. Lol. Hint: I still plan on writing that sequel on The Wall of Separation, and look at how long that is taking. Lol. Plus, I have about three prompts from the Drabble party lined up to do.

I'm so happy you liked it though. I have to say I'm glad it broke your heart, because that is what I was going for. The song you used for the prompt is so beautiful, and I listened to it as I wrote.

[skysamuelle]

Well, Alta it make me happy only knowing that there's a slim chance of it turning into something more... I had even considered offering myself for a cowriting project before i remembered i have not the slightest idea of how those things work - this is how much i grew passionate about this story, in such a short time... to understand each other. ;)

Anyway, i love all your writing so knowing that you have so many projects in the way cheers me up majorly.

And i discovered that song by watching Gossip Girl, because i ship Chuck and Blair something fierce and it was used during one of their most epic scenes... in season 2, when they were still a beautifully tragic un-couple.

What i meant is, the prompt already kept great sentimental value, and you only added to that by writing this piece of utter, majestic awesomeness.

I'll be probably rereading it multiple times in the next days- it's that good, no arguing about it.

[angryzen]

I'm happy you love it that much! Wow! I'd love to work on a project with you. I think the way those works is someone writes one part and the other continues it with discussion of ideas and such. Anyways, I sent you back your fic with a question on Klaus.

[skysamuelle]

Hey, I'm up for it if you are. I think cowriting might be terrific fun if we manage to organize ;)

[skysamuelle]

also i've replied to your question right now, eh!
and my answer was lenghty...very lenghty.