Runaways ~ NC17 ~ Liam/Spike (William) ~ AU Human ~ Chapter 9

Mar 19, 2006 10:09

Here it is folks. Sorry to have kept you all hanging for a week. Hope this chapter satisfies you and you aren't disappointed. We are well on our way with Chapter 10, and it's looking like it won't be the last. That is why I don't like determining before hand how many chapters a story is going to be. I feel it boxes me/us in. We just keep ( Read more... )

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ex_dark_ami March 19 2006, 19:16:36 UTC
That is one energetic frog. Look at it bounce.

Ok getting back on track, this chapter was really sweet. The way Liam made love to Spike was so sweet and tender and just what Spike needed. Both boys are so confused but I think they really need each other.

Nice work, I’m looking forward to seeing how their relationship will progress from here.

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angelspike69 March 20 2006, 02:11:16 UTC
He sure is. I think I'll name him Spike (lol).

Thank you for the feedback and am glad that you liked the chapter. Wanted it sweet and loving to show Spike another way. There will be a few more bumps in this relationship as it builds, you can be sure of that.

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kindredspirit75 March 19 2006, 19:56:24 UTC
I really enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to see the trust slowly develop between Liam and Spike, but they still have too much baggage to let go of before there can be a truly happy ending.

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angelspike69 March 20 2006, 02:12:49 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad that you are enjoying it. As for the baggage, they both have tons of it between them, but they will have to deal with it, and I hope that we write it in a believing and realistic way.

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winchestergirl March 19 2006, 20:21:27 UTC
That was beautiful ...soo tender and finally the hot sex between our two boys, sweet and gentle ...just what Spike needed and Liam too.

I am glad Liam didn't reject Spike's advances at the last .... Finally Liam can see that Spike is trying to show him his love returned by letting him lead and not just assuming that he is acting out of habit ....

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angelspike69 March 20 2006, 02:14:35 UTC
Thank you. Glad you found the sex hot. SPike is trying and he will stumble that is for sure as he learns what a real intimate relationship is like. There is much that he is going to have to come to terms with, as well as Liam, before they can have a solid relationship.

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cyberwitch13666 March 19 2006, 21:24:26 UTC
*is dead from the hotness*

I'll be in my bunk.

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angelspike69 March 20 2006, 02:15:50 UTC
Oh my...didn't mean to kill you. You out of your bunk yet? (lol). So glad you are enjoying and thank you for take the time to post some feedback. It's muchly appreciated.

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incasink March 19 2006, 22:19:32 UTC
oh such a sweet blossoming relationship they have, its lovely to see Liam opening up his heart

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angelspike69 March 20 2006, 02:16:50 UTC
Thanks Inca. I didn't realize you were reading this. Thanks for the feedback. Many more bumps in the road before they can live happily ever after.

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