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Aug 18, 2010 20:00

my muses are eluding me... anyways...

TITLE: Baby Steps
CHARACTERS: Arashi members, NewS members, Horikita Maki, Inoue Mao, Oguri Shun, Ikuta Toma, and a whole horde of other Johnny's and female Japanese actresses
PAIRING: Yamashita Tomohisa/Horikita Maki; Matsumoto Jun/Inoue Mao; others
RATINGS: PG
DISCLAIMER: The only thing i own in this story is the ( Read more... )

@baby steps, **multi-chaptered, fanfic

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ruing August 18 2010, 12:49:18 UTC
Thank you thank you thank you for the update!
oh this chapter is very special for me!
It shows how the Johnny's boys bond together!
oh yeah and I loved the part where it wasn't acceptable for Pi that he wasn't the baby's father.
Although I don't know if he's just possessive or if he really cares about her.
(I really like your writing hehehe...)
Anyways!
I love MAOTSUJUN too!
even though they don't have much interaction here I can still feel the connection trough your words!
and he loves her! SO SWEET XD
Hmmm... wonder how Yamapi and Maki will do?
He doesn't love her...yet? maybe? hahaha!
I'm getting more excited!

P.S.
by the way, medyo naguluhan ako, but, sino si Gussan?
hahaha!

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angelshill August 18 2010, 13:02:44 UTC
thanks! =)
i love johnny interactions, i really can't help it... :)
and i love maotsujun... and since i just can't write that much about them yet since i have to focus on yamaki, i just can't help putting them in!
and Gussan is Yamaguchi Tatsuya, member of JE sempai group Tokio, he's the bassist. he's pretty close to most juniors (well, all of Tokio really are...), including Matsujun. At para mas clear kung bakit connected sa surfing yung analysis nya, Gussan is known to love surfing... which is why malapit sa dagat siya nakatira along with his wife and kid... :)

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ruing August 18 2010, 13:10:50 UTC
oh! taga tokio pala yun!
kuyang kuya siya?
hahaha!
thanks for the info!
yay! yamaki interactions make me smile really really wide!
even when I'm with myself!
XD
thanks again! I'll be waiting!

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angelshill August 18 2010, 13:59:58 UTC
hindi ko sure kung anong ibig mong sabihin ng kuyang-kuya but he is relatively older... he's 38~39 already... but he is cool... really cool... :)

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azraqey August 18 2010, 18:30:08 UTC
yeay!
thanks for updating~~
wow..its really a serious discussion ne~~
i hope Pi can think over about his feeling...

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angelshill August 19 2010, 02:36:31 UTC
thanks... :)
believe me, the first draft was a lot more serious... i just edited it so it wouldn't be too much... i hope it's okay... :)
Pi will have to think his feelings over... but he's a bit preoccupied right now... :)
thanks as always... :)

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pocariporii August 19 2010, 00:40:05 UTC
I like the part with Yamapi thinking it's not acceptable that Maki's baby may not be his...<3 I wish he will realize he love her or grow to love her...And he's her first! Maki definitely likes Yamapi enough to let him take her v-card! They need to get together so they can make more babies...haha

So the mysterious person was Jun...I guessed him but wasn't entirely sure but aww...he didn't try to talk to her with such a great opportunity? But it's sweet he said he loves her with no hesitation. I think Mao would be touched to hear it =D

I really can't wait to see how both couples handle the public and management to get together in the end! Gah, this would make such a great drama with this cast...

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angelshill August 19 2010, 02:41:11 UTC
i like that particular train of thought from Pi...

Yep, it was just Jun... but see, he went there for a purpose (to check on Maki) and that's what he did... seeing Mao there was just a special bonus! :) And yeah, i think Mao would be touched to hear it...

thanks as always! :)

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angelic_nana August 19 2010, 16:00:46 UTC
this is so good! not sure why but i really love the small talk that jun had with ryo. i guess i really feel for ryo when he said that he "want to be able to understand it while it is happening, not only to find out when all is said and done". and i am not even a big fan of ryo! hahahhaahah!

update soon! cheers!

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angelshill August 19 2010, 16:34:21 UTC
i'm happy to hear that... i like that part too... :)
thanks for dropping by... :)

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idajj August 23 2010, 19:24:42 UTC
i so love the fact that Pi hated the possibility that the baby could be someone else's. Shows that he is possesive of Maki which is something I so definitely want to see more and more in the future! *hint hint* Jealous, hot and bothered Pi is my favourite Pi when it comes to Yamaki. kekekeke~ That and lots of sweet loving.

Again, the Johnnys Ai here is wonderful. I cannot wait for moree.~

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angelshill August 24 2010, 15:14:37 UTC
thanks... :)

the 6th chapter is already up if you're interested... :)

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