Fic: Sunday Assassins [5/5]

[angary]

Title: Sunday Assassins [5/5]
Characters: Claire, Adam/Sylar, Peter
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~2300
Summary: After losing her father, Claire spirals down into a world filled with murder, immorality, and greed.
Disclaimer: Neither Heroes nor the show's characters belong to me
Genre: Gen (with some slash on the side)
Spoilers: S3E01

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Comments

[aurilly]

I've been saving this up to read all in one go. And it's really a masterpiece! That tone sets such a unique, quiet and sombre mood, and the pacing of the sections is absolutely perfect. You can really feel the years go by without being at all heavy-handed about it. I feel felt the slow disappearance of Claire's soul.

I loved the little side plot of Sylar looking for the missing Mohinder. You get the feeling he's just as adrift as Claire even though they never speak or get along. Again, that was so subtly handled and din't become crystal clear until the end, when she left, and you knew that they really DID stuff in common, weirdly enough. Your writing for Adam is excellent. I loved his speech to get her to come along in the beginning, and I loved that you dealt with the practicalities of being an immortal. if they went without nutrients, they couldn’t do much except sit around and sulk HEE! And then the enitre bit about Sylar getting itchy after exploding was perfect. A wonderful bit of humour thrown in that worked without wrecking

[angary]

First of all, thank you so, so much for reading and leaving feedback

[angary]

I had to beat my love for Peter(/Sylar) into submission so I could read this and love it.

LOL, well I'm so happy that, despite your shipping preference, you still took all that time to read through this monster of a fic and enjoyed it!

I loved being able to see this sort of Claire (because the future glimpse never gave me enough to work with to see how she could ever become that person).

What's kind of ironic is that, while dark!Claire in V3 intrigued me, I didn't want her to go in that direction, yet I really wanted to explore how she might get to that point in fic. Like I've said countless times, it's one of the reasons why I <3 reading/writing fic so much, because we get to take what little potential we see in canon and twist it to our own liking, and again, I'm thrilled that you liked what you read here!

*Flails* You are so incredibly awesome, really. I wish I could fully express how much I appreciate your feedback, but I hope this'll do: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥! Seriously, thank you so, so much!

[angary]

*Fangirls you back*!