BSG Fic

[andacus]

Title: Blind
Author: andacus
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Summary: They don’t have to talk about it, don’t have to feel the other out for the right path or the right words or anything of the sort, actually. It’s all instinct and feeling; the blind leading the blind.
A/N: This is set between Unfinished Business and Rapture, so spoilers for mid season

Comments

[isis_uf]

You know, you could have left this as just a smutty little pwp -which is what I thought you were doing - and it would have been lovely at that. But then you went and did... did things with it that made the smuttiness that much better because it just brought into focus all of the beauty and flaws with this ship. I love it. Dee and Bill and Tigh and Helo - with ONE LINE - are all great and very in character.

Also, odd compliment here, I love your variation in sentence structure. In a lot of places you have a brilliantly short little line at the end that clarifies everything or sums it up or just generally acts like the period on the end of the point you were making. It works well and really helps set your tone.

[andacus]

Guess that'll teach you to think huh? :p And, damn, I hate it when there's things. Don't you just hate things

I'm incapable of writing PWP, I try and then these little.. things worm their way in. It's sad, really.

Thanks! Helo is teh bestest evar. I'm glad you think so about the sentence structure. I have such a habit of long, drawn out sentences with a million ands, that I wanted to break that up a bit.

[karalee_12]

He sees the cycle, the need to hurt each other and the need to heal each other and he wonders if they would need healing at all if they didn’t let the other wound so deeply. This noose that tethers them together is unbreakable, but maybe they don’t have to hang by it.

I really like this description of the two of them. I feel like it fits with their relationship. And, I just really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing!

[andacus]

Aww, thank you. Thanks for reviewing!

[callmeonetrack]

Oh I loved this. So well written and in character and yes, hot too. And just when I'd think it was over, you'd surprise me with another section more interesting than the last. Really wonderful. *Makes a mental note to check out your other bsg fics when it's not 2 am*

[andacus]

*g* Thank you! Such nice things you say.

[delle]

to say "oh, yum" really does this a disservice. yes, it's hot and yes, you write an excellent sex scene! but there's so much more here, the characterizations - I'm especially fond of the Tigh/Bill exchange - and .... oh I loved this. Thank you so much.

[andacus]

HAHA! Well, yum is always good. And thank you so very much! ♥

[cattm]

Oh wow. This is so good. Very hot and great characterisations. The last part is what really makes this fic so good, the way Lee realizes the destructiveness in their current affair, which ties in so well with the way he broke things off with Kara in canon. You also really manage to capture the others really well even though they are not a big part of the story - Dee, Helo, Adama, Tigh. Thanks for sharing this!

[andacus]

Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it. :D