Map of your head (chapter 21)

Sep 03, 2011 10:43

Title: Map of your head
Fandom: U-KISS
Characters & Pairings: Elvin, Xander, OFC, other possible episodic characters
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Fluff, Humor, Drama
Summary: "Because the language confuses, like computers refuse to understand how I'm feeling today." 
Eli is new to this world. Kevin makes him feel like home.
Disclaimer: The title ( Read more... )

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dark_n_silence January 11 2012, 07:49:25 UTC
So....hi. LATE TO THE PARTY, THAT'S ME.

I stumbled on this a few days ago and had it bookmarked for future reading (can't resist mental institution AUs). I started this morning and spent all day reading all 21 chapters of it. MY HEART. IT HURT SO GOOD. There were so many times I thought that I was going to cry. And then reading the end... I teared up and I think my heart shattered but then OMG KEVIN WAS ALIVE AND IT WAS LIKE A GIANT BANDAID HAD PIECED MY HEART BACK TOGETHER AGAIN.

So... though I don't usually comment on fics very often, I had to tell you that I officially love you and your writing (cause in the past couple days I've read everything else you've written too, keke I'mnotastalker). So yea. I'm your fan now. xD;; ♥

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anca_chan January 13 2012, 12:11:17 UTC
Sorry for the late reply, but holy crap thank you very much. I'm overjoyed you liked it.

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0_degrees_elvin November 29 2012, 07:35:01 UTC
... Now they can shower together, I guess.
That was the lamest possible thing I could've said at the end of this, forgive me.
BUT, MY FEELINGS, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Thank you so much for this.
There were so many things I liked about this. How they slowly overcame each other's boundaries, the beauty of Chapter 15, and how even this last chapter was heart-wrenching. You're amazing at portraying emotions, and thus making us poor readers feel all these things. T_T Which means you're doing it right, of course. ^_^
I hope one day soon you come back from having a life and getting a college degree and all that and write some more. <3

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*incoherent sobbing* mylifegetoutw5 April 21 2013, 18:30:06 UTC
I'll have to admit that the ending felt a bit...like it was missing something. But that's fine because you have reduced my impassive self into a heap of sobbings. I came across this fic by accident, I was actually going to read the other chaptered fic but clicked on this one by chance.

Beautifully written. I loved how things went by periods of time and it had this nice calming yet suspense-like feel to it. Very nice. Love it. Continue writing PLEASE.

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