Comments | anarion: Fic: 221B - I spy with my little eye

anarion

Fic: 221B - I spy with my little eye

Feb 13, 2013 18:28

Title: I spy with my little eye
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 238.

( Day 238 - “What are you looking at, Freak?” )

case, friendship, humour, sherlock_bbc, slash, lestrade, donovan, prompt-fill, sorry no porn, 365 days challenge, banter, sherlock/john

Comments 6

treelight February 13 2013, 17:32:15 UTC

LOL, of course I know that game, but I never heard the English expression before!

anarion February 13 2013, 17:35:08 UTC

What do you call it where you are from?

treelight February 13 2013, 17:56:49 UTC

I am from Germany ;)

So it's: "Ich seh etwas das du nicht siehst."

And usually you add a hint about what you are seeing, like "... and it is red".

verityburns February 14 2013, 12:26:42 UTC

Bloody Donovan. I like Lestrade, but sometimes I do get annoyed with him for allowing such unprofessionalism. I like your description of him having 'a smirk in his eyes', though... I think I'd forgive him a lot when he has that cheeky gleam :D

veniachan February 17 2013, 17:22:12 UTC

I like the title a lot :D

Strangly enought, I have a feeling that they really started to become a team. I mean, including Donovan and Anderson. Not a team of friends or people who can work togehter perfectly, but somehow... hard to say but now everyone have a role they follow and... of course Sherlock's able to surprise them again and again, but they're prepared to being surprised. And the mutual insults are part of the game as well. Seems to me they find their rythm, their group dynamics. (Does it make sense? I'm not sure XD)

And of course, John understands Sherlock perfectly <3

purrculier1 February 26 2013, 20:26:58 UTC

*reads* title
*Thinks* about balcony in last 221B
*reads* tags
*Pouts*
*reads* story
*Mind Boggles* I was not expecting that, just reading along enjoying the banter.
“I don’t know. Freak seems to have had some kind of epiphany while staring at the warehouse. What do you see?”
“A warehouse?”
TeeHee. Yay! a funny one.
But then:
John watched them go and he looked at the warehouse for a few moments before following them. He knew what Sherlock had seen: an opportunity to stop him from going crazy, to occupy his mind, to feel needed and valued; distraction and purpose through the smell of gunpowder and blood.
*Stealthy*Feels*Bomb* goes KA-BOOM! and it was beautiful and it was elegantly twisty and it made my heart hurt in a happy way? Perfect,Thank You!
Your AN: In German the name of the game is literally 'I see something that you don't see'. But I think the meaning is the same, yes?Reading that just made the final bit so much more perfectyer(yes, that's a word now)and I wish I could read German so you could use that as a title 'cause then ' ( ... )