Fic: 221B - I spy with my little eye

Feb 13, 2013 18:28



Title: I spy with my little eye
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 238.

Day 238 - “What are you looking at, Freak?” )

case, friendship, humour, sherlock_bbc, slash, lestrade, donovan, prompt-fill, sorry no porn, 365 days challenge, banter, sherlock/john

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purrculier1 February 26 2013, 20:26:58 UTC
*reads* title
*Thinks* about balcony in last 221B
*reads* tags
*Pouts*
*reads* story
*Mind Boggles* I was not expecting that, just reading along enjoying the banter.
“I don’t know. Freak seems to have had some kind of epiphany while staring at the warehouse. What do you see?”
“A warehouse?”
TeeHee. Yay! a funny one.
But then:
John watched them go and he looked at the warehouse for a few moments before following them. He knew what Sherlock had seen: an opportunity to stop him from going crazy, to occupy his mind, to feel needed and valued; distraction and purpose through the smell of gunpowder and blood.
*Stealthy*Feels*Bomb* goes KA-BOOM! and it was beautiful and it was elegantly twisty and it made my heart hurt in a happy way? Perfect,Thank You!
Your AN: In German the name of the game is literally 'I see something that you don't see'. But I think the meaning is the same, yes?
Reading that just made the final bit so much more perfectyer(yes, that's a word now)and I wish I could read German so you could use that as a title 'cause then 'sophisticated title is sophisticated'tag would have given us some warning (maybe) have been used and I am babbling while bouncing in my chair 'cause this was so,so,good.

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