Fic: 221B - When I cry in the rain only you can see my tears

Nov 03, 2012 18:13



Title: When I cry in the rain only you can see my tears
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: I mention characters dying (not John or Sherlock though) in the future and of old age. Still...
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

Day 182 - Sherlock is not a beach person. )

hurt, this is kinda dark, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, hurt/comfort, prompt-fill, love, one bed, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john, i'm sorry

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tracionn November 3 2012, 18:18:20 UTC
*sniff* I love the paths you choose when given prompts. This here is heartbreaking but wonderful and it'll take a while until my stomach stops feeling heavy. Long while. And also, it's like I can almost smell the breeze and I love the rough coast and sea too so much.

In other news: ASDFGGLHGF You'll be at Sherlopalooza?? OMG. Can I please come and say hello and have a fangirl moment all over you? HOW WILL I FIND YOU?
You'll no doubts have already arrangements and I'm meeting people there too but I really really would love to say hello.
And thank you for the advice! I might have to bring my bagpack as I will need it fkying in only on Sat morning but it's not a huge one and God I hope it'll be okay.

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chocolamousse November 3 2012, 18:36:11 UTC
coming home half-frozen to a room warmed by a fire, climbing into bed with John.
Awww.
*suddenly feels like snuggling*
*deeply regrets she can't snuggle with John. Or Sherlock. Or both*

And this is where they’ll go in the future, when Mrs Hudson dies, or Mycroft, or Lestrade.
*smiles nervously*
You mean "if", not "when", don't you? DON'T YOU??? Well, at least you didn't say "when John dies" because I have problems with this kind of fics and I can't stand the idea of Sherlock or John dying and why do I even talk about that and... *sobs irrepressibly*

Let's finish on a cheerful note. I found Sherlock in shorts and a Hawaiian shirt here. :D


... )

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treelight November 3 2012, 19:06:24 UTC
That was beautifully sad, I really liked it, and I'm a happiness-shipper.

Furthermore, I want to thank you for the word "barnacles", because I am not a native English-speaker but a lover of that language and always enjoy learning new words.
Yes, I got what I probably meant from the context, but I like to be sure about it when it looks like a word I might want to use, too ;)

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rox712 November 3 2012, 21:44:05 UTC
*Sigh* It's not as much sad as melancholic, I would say. It talks about both of them together for a long, long time, still giving each other exactly what they need. Beautiful.

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ledasdaughter November 3 2012, 22:14:23 UTC
oh this is beautiful...and there must be some strong wind in my room, because somehow I can't see properly...

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