Fic: 221B - Taken (2/6)

[anarion]

Title: Taken (2/6)
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

Comments

[verityburns]

2/4????? Yesterday said 1/3!!! It did, it did, I know it did - you can't fool me with your cunning edits. You just want to torture us for longer with poor Sherlock in peril and John all worried and... and...

*gulps*

Sorry about that - it's just that 'all my feelings were surfacing for a brief moment before I could reel them in.'

Ooh... is distracted by mention of Ronda - I like Ronda!

Aww... Lestrade is there for John. OK, I'm still worried, but now I'm aww-ing too. Feelings... what are you doing?!

Killer last line!

OK, bring on 3/5. I am ready!

[anarion]

2/4????? Yesterday said 1/3!!!
Well, I learned that from the best. :P

[verityburns]

I knew that was going to happen. As soon as I hit 'Post Comment', I thought, 'You absolute muppet!'

*waits for chocola to join in the pointing and laughing*

I guess now I understand why people say, 'No, it's OK - more is good!' when I do it!

[chocolamousse]

Who, moi? Pointing and laughing? Oh, you're SO misjudging me.
*points and laughs*
Anyway, this is not the same thing at all. You can't stop writing because you want to give us (and Sherlock and John) even more romance, cuddles, happiness and sex. (I hope you don't get me wrong when I say you want to give us more sex.). Anarion, on the other hand, wants to give us (and Sherlock and John) even more angst and nail-biting. What might we deduce about your respective hearts?
*looks at Anarion sternly*

[treelight]

Oh my, 4 instead of 3 parts means 1 more cliffhanger and episode until the hopefully happy ending, but I'm glad you gave us at least part 2 now already ;)

[sabrinaphynn]

Eeeeeevil, you is. But eventually there will be more.
As long as this gets resolved, I shall overlook the errors in counting.. THIS time. (tongue placed firmly in cheek there...)
I guess I must soldier on along with the boys and wait. I do wonder if Molly noticed anything though... She always seems to pick up on things most miss- in her own way, not like Sherlock. Perhaps the nail varnish shall spark a memory...

[chocolamousse]

As you said sooner, "Part two is coming up today. Not that that will help...". It doesnt' help indeed. Look at me, I'm so distressed I didn't even shout, "INNUENDO!" at With a soft noise John went to his knees. John is a shaken spouse and I'm a shaken reader.

a soldier from head to toe
To toe. Toe.
Did you have psychotherapy or something?

“He said this was bigger than any of us.”
Wait, bigger than Mycroft? Ooooh, that's really very very big. (This sentence is ridiculous. Mark Gatiss is anything but big.)

So now you have to wait. :D
*sighs* Oh, great. Also, I hate this smile. You sadist.

I also can't count, because it has four parts and not three...
Oh, better and better. You know, this prompt of yours, "Hurt without comfort", well, it talks about what you do to us. I hope you're feeling guilty now. :D

[anarion]

To toe. Toe.
Did you have psychotherapy or something?
I was trying to ignore the implications of this idiom until someone threw them in my face...
Are you fishing for another chapter of angst here? :D

“He said this was bigger than any of us.”
I'm actually more worried that there was no innuendo from you regarding this sentence... ;)

[chocolamousse]

It's only because you didn't write, “He said this was bigger than any of ours.” :D

[rox712]

Ok, I'm ok now. Verity saved me from the worse with a little bit of laughter, but I still feel the urge to hide under my desk till you post part 4, 5 or 6 and I can read the happy end.