Fic: 221B - Taken (2/6)

Oct 04, 2012 19:34



Title: Taken (2/6)
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.

Day 155 - With a soft noise John went to his knees next to the pool of blood on the floor. )

friendship, anarion is evil, 221b, sherlock_bbc, slash, hurt without comfort, lestrade, prompt-fill, angst, bamf!john, 365 days challenge, sherlock/john, mycroft

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verityburns October 4 2012, 17:42:42 UTC
2/4????? Yesterday said 1/3!!! It did, it did, I know it did - you can't fool me with your cunning edits. You just want to torture us for longer with poor Sherlock in peril and John all worried and... and...

*gulps*

Sorry about that - it's just that 'all my feelings were surfacing for a brief moment before I could reel them in.'

Ooh... is distracted by mention of Ronda - I like Ronda!

Aww... Lestrade is there for John. OK, I'm still worried, but now I'm aww-ing too. Feelings... what are you doing?!

Killer last line!

OK, bring on 3/5. I am ready!

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anarion October 4 2012, 18:00:38 UTC
2/4????? Yesterday said 1/3!!!
Well, I learned that from the best. :P

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verityburns October 4 2012, 18:02:55 UTC
I knew that was going to happen. As soon as I hit 'Post Comment', I thought, 'You absolute muppet!'

*waits for chocola to join in the pointing and laughing*

I guess now I understand why people say, 'No, it's OK - more is good!' when I do it!

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chocolamousse October 4 2012, 21:08:53 UTC
Who, moi? Pointing and laughing? Oh, you're SO misjudging me.
*points and laughs*
Anyway, this is not the same thing at all. You can't stop writing because you want to give us (and Sherlock and John) even more romance, cuddles, happiness and sex. (I hope you don't get me wrong when I say you want to give us more sex.). Anarion, on the other hand, wants to give us (and Sherlock and John) even more angst and nail-biting. What might we deduce about your respective hearts?
*looks at Anarion sternly*

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verityburns October 4 2012, 21:18:27 UTC
What might we deduce about your respective hearts?

Um... that I withhold the sex, but deliver angst and nail-biting...

And that Anarion delivers the (smoking-hot) sex on an extremely regular basis, but occasionally withholds a bit of angst?

And that's somehow this is all fine :D

I love this fandom!

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chocolamousse October 4 2012, 22:03:54 UTC
Oh, well done. I aimed to make Anarion feel horribly guilty and repentant and willing to post the next parts as soon as possible, but you spoilt everything with your "this is all fine". You encourage her on the road to evil. Don't come and complain if tomorrow she casually says, "Oh, by the way, you know, when I said 'I also can't count, because it has four parts and not three'? Well, in fact I can't spell properly either, because I meant 'it has ten parts and not three.'" And she'll add a "death character" tag or something. And it will turn out that it was Sherlock's nail varnish after all. (This may be the worst part.)

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verityburns October 4 2012, 22:07:29 UTC
Well, if some people were publishing their works, then some people could resort to the tactics the rest of us employ when she gets too tantalising...

Threaten her with toe-fic!

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chocolamousse October 4 2012, 22:36:17 UTC
*looks daggers at Verity*
Chocolamousse couldn't read this comment because she went to bed. Also, did you know that the French for "get off" is "prendre son pied", which literally means "take one's foot"? I'm not even kidding!
*watches Anarion faint with disgust*

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anarion October 4 2012, 22:40:00 UTC
*watches Anarion faint with disgust*
Just for that I'm adding another chapter of angst to this!

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chocolamousse October 4 2012, 22:52:00 UTC
Oh, crumpets.

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rox712 October 4 2012, 22:59:08 UTC
Verity! Chocola! Stop it right now! You'll get me to live under my desk for a month if you keep up taunting! 6 chapters now! *iz dead*

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anarion October 4 2012, 22:40:49 UTC
Threaten her with toe-fic!

Just for that I'm adding another chapter of angst to this!

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verityburns October 4 2012, 22:43:20 UTC
Chocolate! I meant to say 'chocolate'

'Threaten her with chocolate'... THAT was the phrase I was going for.

DAMN my keyboard!

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anarion October 4 2012, 22:39:03 UTC
What might we deduce about your respective hearts?
I've been reliably informed that I have an evil one. :D

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sabrinaphynn October 5 2012, 18:13:10 UTC
Gaffawing over here in the corner.... Honestly, the comments are nearly as much fun as the stories with you and Atlin..
(please note that I am absolutely delighted to be tortured more with this story, and will be happy to throw chocolate, caffeinated beverages, and or handmade biscuits your way to encourage the madness)

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rox712 October 4 2012, 21:30:30 UTC
Sorry but "OK, bring on 3/5. I am ready!" That one just killed me. I'll comment as soon as I stop laughing.

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