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tinyangl May 11 2008, 02:38:49 UTC
Next part!! Breaking it up just in case.
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Her fingers lightly tease with the hair at the back of his neck as she slowly rocks to the music with him. Jin thinks it's a bit of a tease, but her body is pressed so close against his that he can feel her breasts against his chest. The beat of the song only lends itself to the slow rocking of their bodies against each other. Her shirt has hitched up at the back, giving Jin enough skin to play with - a finger drags from one side to the other.

Her skin is soft with a tinge of sweat from the dancing. Jin thinks that's hotter than anything. Jin starts to move a little faster, but her hands are back on his waist before he realizes it, and she's whispering in his ear again. Take it slow, nothing crazy.Somehow, the words do calm him down and his eyes shut, letting his body take control of everything else. Her arms are back around his neck and once again, her fingers tangle inside her hair. She breathes against the side of her neck, lips so close to his collarbone that it tingles ( ... )

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anamuan May 11 2008, 03:18:40 UTC
;klaflk;jafl;kfalk;jfaljk;faljk;fa ;ljkfal;jkfal;kjfa;ljkfa

I LOVE. i love the way you've got her saying lines from LOVEJUICE.

;jklaf;jklfa *____________* OK YOU GOT THEM OUTSIDE THE CLUB! GOOD START!! ♥

I am on the bottom of page 18, and half-way through my analysis of one segment of conversation and i want to rip my eyes out. But this. this kind of makes the world better.

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tinyangl May 11 2008, 04:18:09 UTC
AHAHAH I COULDN'T HELP IT. a;skldjfal;skjd I am very at a loss for dialogue. XPPPP So this is my prize!!! i'm so glad it makes your world better. and your'e SO CLOSE. ohmygod. SO CLOSE.

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4_03_am May 11 2008, 03:20:24 UTC
uhhh take it to the room and sex things up for sure. *___*

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tinyangl May 11 2008, 04:18:34 UTC
asdfkajs;dfljasd it's done. this was too difficult. i can't believe i wrote porn. it's been too long.

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