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analineblue

Merlin RPS fic~

Apr 19, 2009 15:00

Well, I'm sure I knew this would happen sooner or later... >_> I just really couldn't help it, I guess? :P Plus, there was a contest. 8D

Title: Second Kiss
Author: analineblue
Fandom/Pairing: Merlin RPS; Bradley/Colin
Rating: PG-13 (for kissing, I guess? ^_~)
Warnings: None, worksafe.
Word Count: 2,081
Summary: The first kiss had been easy, it's the second ( Read more... )

merlin, fic

Comments 67

voldything April 19 2009, 21:18:02 UTC

eeeeeeee I LOVED it!

analineblue April 20 2009, 18:28:34 UTC

Yay! I'm glad. :D Thanks for reading!

_bettina_ April 19 2009, 21:57:57 UTC

Lovely.

analineblue April 20 2009, 18:29:08 UTC

Thank you. :)

hitome_bore April 19 2009, 22:14:36 UTC

It's not possible for these things to get better after a re-reading, right? Usually? Because this one totally did and I am probably more surprised than I should be because this is YOU and you are made of awesome and PLEAES DON'T EVER CHANGE <3333

*happy sigh* My love for these guys has really been reaching hysterical bounds lately and you are, of course, not helping in the slightest. Then again I'm not really complaining, especially when they make it so damn easy XD What does that say about them anyway, that we dug our heels in at first but ended up falling into the fandom anyway? Both of them being utterly hot and adorable helped I'm sure, but I'd like to think that the certain spark we're so picky about searching for and finding repeatable instances of was undeniable enough to give us little reason against taking the plunge :D

And now we have a whole new sandbox to play in and you are already building splendid castles ♥ ♥

analineblue April 20 2009, 18:55:08 UTC

XDDD Well, I didn't change anything since I sent it to you? So I guess I just must be THAT awesome, lol :P

You have no idea how happy I was that you liked this though, just since it does feel like such a foreign thing to me? (RPS without Nagayan? :P) So yes, your encouragement has really been much appreciated. ♥

I do think it may be your turn to build something now though? XDDDD

And okay, I'm realizing now that I totally need some non-Merlin BradleyxColin icons here. :P

aeroport_art April 20 2009, 03:58:29 UTC

Gahhhh this was SO. CUTE. Fluffy and sweet and happy-making--just the way RPS should be!!

analineblue April 20 2009, 18:56:35 UTC

Thank you SO much. XD I'm happy you liked it, and I really appreciate the comment! <3

mrs_leary April 20 2009, 06:54:33 UTC

Ooh, I enjoyed that... The 'second kiss' prompt is a good one, and you made excellent use of it! Instinct took Bradley thus far, and now he has to work for it... I think you captured Bradley's narrative voice really well here. And it was all so sweet, and funny. Well done!

analineblue April 20 2009, 19:05:22 UTC

*nods* Yeah, this idea just kind of popped into my mind immediately when I saw that prompt. :D I'm really glad that you liked it though, and that Bradley's voice came through and seemed to work. (I have a feeling Colin may be a lot harder? He really seems like a mystery to me, so much of the time. *_*)

Anyway~ Thanks so much for reading, and for the comment. :)

mrs_leary April 21 2009, 16:01:46 UTC

Ooh, so now I must encourage you to give Colin's POV a go! I think you did so well with Bradley's POV, that whatever you write would be very interesting to read. I certainly agree that Colin appears very enigmatic, especially compared to right-out-there Bradley - but Colin wouldn't see himself that way. And it begs the question of why. Why is he relatively quiet? What is he guarding? (My immediate reaction to that is: 'Gay! He's GAY!' But, you know, there COULD be other reasons. I suppose.) Ahem. Whatever you end up writing, from whoever's POV, I will look forward to reading it!

analineblue April 22 2009, 00:02:43 UTC

I appreciate that encouragement a lot. XD And I definitely would like to have a go at Colin's POV at some point. *nodnod* I think I usually tend to focus more on the character (err... individual, in this case? ^_~) that I feel a more immediate connection to? But I do find Colin very intriguing, and I definitely agree that he seems to be very much the kind of person who wouldn't think there's really any mystery about him at all, and who wouldn't really get why anyone else would see him like that?

He's just so interesting, with the whole shy bit, and then I always think about how Bradley mentions that he's so polite, etc. And of course I can't help but question, like you mentioned, what's behind it, I guess? And what effect those personality traits must have had/still be having on their relationship. *__*

Anyway~ I do really hope to write more soon though, one POV or the other! <3

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