Be Careful What You Wish For...

Jun 25, 2009 00:58

This is dedicated to my long time dearest friend

Hi there...

It took me forever to get around that LJ thingy but it think I’m able post this without much trouble.

What is this you might ask.

Well after my dearest friend nagged for like 6 months I decided to come back to writing…

Now this was a looooong way and I’m not even through the first quarter ( Read more... )

yunjae

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howlsgirl June 25 2009, 06:19:13 UTC
First of all_YES!!!! I am SO GLAD YOU ARE WRITING!!!!!!!!!! I was fussing through my updates and going super fast and I saw your profile pic. I stopped and I couldn't believe it!!!! I was so happy!!!! Congratulations!!!!!!!!! After the first try, it gets easier ( ... )

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anael777 June 25 2009, 07:06:09 UTC
kyaaa >///< I have to say THANK YOU!! (I finally know how you feel thanking pple all the time ( ... )

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howlsgirl June 27 2009, 09:14:29 UTC
And reading it, seeing the story have a kind of class-you know, it was great! CUz I mean, I think it's far more interesting to truly describe something, with all the care that you did, than to just slam your readers with "steamy moments." In my mind, it make the scene far more special, more intimate. You know? It was so wonderful the way you handled it!!!!!

She lost it? Ooo. lol

I adored that first paragraph!!!!! I really could feel Yunho's fatigue. It came right off the page!!!! Every word you used, you used so carefully, no waste, all of it leading straight to the point. And that's hard to do-and amazing when do so well.

Ahem. Yea, My computer screen was fogging up while I was reading about Jae there. You got some skills. I might faint one day reading your fics! LOL!!!!!!

So, you've been thinking about this for a while? neat!!! I thought it was great. One moment. Written so perfectly. I was right there with both characters.

YAY!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!

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anael777 June 27 2009, 22:41:16 UTC
hehe well thank you for all the sweet and warm words ^^' and thank you for simply being there coz I wouldn't be able to do it without you!!!

your word-work is just so amazing and I would love to be as good as you are >.< I need to write more >.>

thank you for sharing you thoughts *hug* I'm glad that Yunho's confusion and stress and weariness came through ^^' it was hard writing it >..<

XD Jae's body is something though I have to say ^^' I only wanted to focus on image of his body as detailed as I could and in as short time as I could. It was meant to be only 5 minutes no more ^^' but I had to read it over and over to see if the feel was right >.> *hands cloth to wipe the screen*

my dear!! please tell me if I'm writing correctly coz English is my second lang and I know I make mistakes >.< so if there are any please point them out ^^'

thank you thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muuuuuuuuuuuuuuch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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anael777 August 17 2009, 15:45:04 UTC
well that was my first piece since a looooong time XD

thank you for reading it X3
*hands tissue* are you ok? XD hope you won't bleed to death >.<

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baboboy August 17 2009, 06:23:26 UTC
the tittle reminds me of daughtry's "home" :D

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