Be Careful What You Wish For...

[anael777]

This is dedicated to my long time dearest friend

Hi there...

It took me forever to get around that LJ thingy but it think I’m able post this without much trouble.

What is this you might ask.

Well after my dearest friend nagged for like 6 months I decided to come back to writing…

Now this was a looooong way and I’m not even through the first quarter

Comments

[howlsgirl]

First of all_YES!!!! I am SO GLAD YOU ARE WRITING!!!!!!!!!! I was fussing through my updates and going super fast and I saw your profile pic. I stopped and I couldn't believe it!!!! I was so happy!!!! Congratulations!!!!!!!!! After the first try, it gets easier

[anael777]

kyaaa >///< I have to say THANK YOU!! (I finally know how you feel thanking pple all the time

[howlsgirl]

And reading it, seeing the story have a kind of class-you know, it was great! CUz I mean, I think it's far more interesting to truly describe something, with all the care that you did, than to just slam your readers with "steamy moments." In my mind, it make the scene far more special, more intimate. You know? It was so wonderful the way you handled it!!!!!

She lost it? Ooo. lol

I adored that first paragraph!!!!! I really could feel Yunho's fatigue. It came right off the page!!!! Every word you used, you used so carefully, no waste, all of it leading straight to the point. And that's hard to do-and amazing when do so well.

Ahem. Yea, My computer screen was fogging up while I was reading about Jae there. You got some skills. I might faint one day reading your fics! LOL!!!!!!

So, you've been thinking about this for a while? neat!!! I thought it was great. One moment. Written so perfectly. I was right there with both characters.

YAY!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!

[anael777]

hehe well thank you for all the sweet and warm words ^^' and thank you for simply being there coz I wouldn't be able to do it without you!!!

your word-work is just so amazing and I would love to be as good as you are >.< I need to write more >.>

thank you for sharing you thoughts *hug* I'm glad that Yunho's confusion and stress and weariness came through ^^' it was hard writing it >..<

XD Jae's body is something though I have to say ^^' I only wanted to focus on image of his body as detailed as I could and in as short time as I could. It was meant to be only 5 minutes no more ^^' but I had to read it over and over to see if the feel was right >.> *hands cloth to wipe the screen*

my dear!! please tell me if I'm writing correctly coz English is my second lang and I know I make mistakes >.< so if there are any please point them out ^^'

thank you thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muuuuuuuuuuuuuuch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[howlsgirl]

Second language?????? Gosh, I would never have noticed!!!! I mean, sure if I ever see a mistake like that, I'll mention it-but gee. If you had not said something, I would not have guessed!!!

I'm here. I mean, I'd be here for you anyway, but what kind of schumck would I be if after ALL you have done for me-I didn't lift a finger to help? Like I said, and will continue to say, there is something wondrously clean and straight through about your writing that I would LOVE to have. You say my word play is good (THANK YOU)-but more times than not, I feel it is super flowery and not necessary.

WRITE MORE! ANd I love the way you go through a scene. It's so easy to follow. Like you are putting me right there in the room.

(takes cloth.) The scene with Jae was PERFECT. It did read just right. In fact, I don't think I've ever read a sequence so elegantly composed. Really.

You are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo welcome!!!!!!!!!!

[anael777]

em yeah it's my second langg as I'm Polish ^^'
I have a Bachelor's degree in translation and teaching of English but still you can see I'm quite bad - -;
ohh yes you probably did notice ^^' my spelling is sooo bad and everything >.< but I try my best ne ^^'
thank you for your kind words >///<

no no no your word play is so inspiring and so good!! there is never such a thing as too many words!! as long as they are used with thoughtfullness and have accurate meaning, one can't say that there is too much of them!!!

but thank you very much ^^' I'm happy you like it ^^'

[howlsgirl]

I'M POLISH TOO!!!!!!!

Sorry. A little enthusiastic. But I am on my father's side. I wish i could speak the language.

Wow. A Bachelor's degree. That is so impressive. and so wonderful. I am humbled just by the idea, that with all the wonderful things you do, you take the time to come and read my drather. Gosh. Thank you.

Spell check is my best friend. lol.

Rofl!!!!!! Not too many words? I'm glad you think so. And I will continue to try and make each word meaningful and thoughtful, just like you said.

[anael777]

YOU ARE???!!!???! JEZUS CHRIST!!! heh nice to meet you ^^'
wow hehe ^^' I think there is no country you wouldn;t find a Polish person in XD mark my words in 50 years world will be speaking Polish aahahahahaaa *cough cough* ok sorry for that 'world dominatioon moment' XD
hehe I think I just got too much tea in my bloodsystem or rathet too much blood in my teasystem XD I'm getting all crazy
anyway hehe so your dad is Polish?? cool ^^'
heh I don;t blame you Polish is effin hard - -; grammar is unreal and speling o..m..g.. = ='

do do doooo continue to write!!!!

(I have to find time to read AAO and your other story on blogspot- -; sorry I'm kinda busy now >.<)

[howlsgirl]

Pleaseeeeeee don't worry about it!!!! Just knowing you're here-it's a gift.

Poles are everywhere. It's too true. The wall fell and we all went crazy. LOL!!! But, yea. My dad is Polish. He had the Polish grandmother who wanted him to speak the language, but he never learned. Therefore I am a disgrace to my heritage. lol!!! But I'm crazy proud of it. About being a part of the history of Poland and the strength of the people. Sorry. Crazy moment.

World domination. Everyone must and enjoy pierogies!!!

Too much tea. LOL!!!!

[anael777]

pierogi XD wow I'm amazed!!
I actually miss pierogi >.<
I have to make some but I'm just too damn lazy and dangerous in the kitchen to do so XD

anyways I'm off to read AAO see you there ^^'