Comments | amyross: Ficlet Three

amyross

Ficlet Three

Jun 01, 2008 11:10

It’s a rare and magical occasion, a seemingly impossible confluence of a sunny Cardiff and an almost suspiciously quiet Rift. The amazement had affected Jack so profoundly that he’d given the entire team the day off. Owen, Gwen and Toshiko had wondered, briefly, if their boss was feeling all right, but understandably hadn’t hung around long enough ( Read more... )

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amyross June 1 2008, 12:50:42 UTC

Thanks! I know picture-perfect happiness is probably unrealistic, but I absolutely believe there can be perfect moments.

Feedback's like a drug, isn't it?

order_of_chaos June 1 2008, 13:07:04 UTC

Ohh. ♥ You write the fluffiest fluff ever. It's impossible not to love this :D

amyross June 1 2008, 13:39:46 UTC

I know, it's weird. I'm a cynic and a pessimist ... so where the hell is all this fluffy fluff coming from?

It's my dark side ;)

Thanks for the lovely comment, I'm beaming!

morgan52x June 1 2008, 13:25:38 UTC

Awww! Jack and kids is just so adorable. Lovely little ficlet.

amyross June 1 2008, 13:40:21 UTC

I know. I thought about expanding this scene, maybe writing a longer fic. But I think my head might explode from the cuteness!

cowgrrl June 1 2008, 13:37:08 UTC

Very sweet. I like it when they get to be out in the sunshine (so rare).

amyross June 1 2008, 13:41:35 UTC

The sunshine seems to bring out all our best sides. I think taking them out of the dark, cold underground world makes the fluffiness seem less out of place!

teachwriteslash June 1 2008, 13:49:21 UTC

Just gorgeous. I have been in a foul mood all weekend (damn boat) and these pieces have been just what the doctor ordered (at least his small little box is bigger on the inside).

Please keep writing these :-)

amyross June 1 2008, 14:10:27 UTC

Oh, no. Sorry you're having a bad weekend. What's with the boat?

I'll try to keep writing ... I think I'll skim through my writing "scraps" file and see if there's anything I can appropriate. Or at least, if anything inspires me.

BTW, I also teach, and your "no money" disclaimers always make me smile :)

teachwriteslash June 1 2008, 14:45:12 UTC

The boat is someone's idea of a "weekend away" ****glares pointedly across the deck and the human fishing from said boat****

My idea of a weekend away includes beds with more than two feet of clearance and room service.

Apparently, I need to be more clear in my instructions.

Nice to see a fellow teacher!