a Day in our Life { chapter 4 }

[amtopm_xx]

Slowly but surely, my confidence in this story is falling. >_< I got more responses when I posted on arashi_on (you know, BEFORE I knew it wasn't allowed) and now I'm reduced to jent_fanfics and arashirabu. *sigh* ANYWAY, next chapter. The expo finally starts! Time for Naomi to meet 2 of the boys and unleash her...competitive/angry side. lol. Oh,

Comments

[happyhapee]

yaaaaaaaay! update! *jumps around excitedly*

i love the update!!!!! i could really imagine everything! especially how you described ohno and nino and the expressions and stuff. i could see ohno's indifferent facial expresssion and nino's mischievous one. hahaha. love love love it!

does naomi have a little crush on ohno? haha.

once again, na-chan, good job.

i'm officially a fan of your writing. haha...

[sasami9969]

you made Nino such a little bastard lol I love it.

You really have a great writing style. I especially love the recipe in the beginning.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. byee!

[sunset_splashes]

Wow. It seems Nino is REALLY irritable in the morning! Hahaha.
And the way you described Ohno!!! It's so awesome. I could tell it was Ohno :D So cute!
Please keep writing :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! So exciting hahaha ^^

[jamasunda]

Uwaaa~ CLIFFHANGER.

Please update as soon as you can <3?

[sallyteukie]

ohno! please update!!
love your fanfics. *cries*