160. (teach us both how to dance in the forest) fire - chapter one, part two

[sing_song_sung]

Title | (teach us both how to dance in the forrest) fire 
Chapter | one [part 2]
Rating | pg-13
Characters | Nate, Serena. Also Dan, Blair, Tripp. 
Summary | Words on a piece of paper, Serena thinks, forcing herself to smile wider. Those are nothing more than words from a piece of paper, edited by someone else.
Notes | Season one still happened, but I'm

Comments

[ericaaalynn]

I'm really liking this! I hope you update soon! :)

[dae_dreemer]

Raaaaaaain. Gah. I love thisssss even though the sadness. :s So much sadness. I actually really do need more.... ignore my previous comment, spread is out terrible. :P More is better. Hee.

It's all so broken. :( And their bb's are so sweet. I love Zoey muchly. ♥

Thank you for sharing. *hugs* <-- which NS need

[yamyamburger]

wow great story im so liking this. write more please.

thank you for writing NS fics miss them so much!

[ext_1112727]

I love this NS fic of yours (well, practically all of your NS fics!)! So much heartbreak and sadness. I can't help but get teary-eyed when Nate asked Serena if she was leaving him. There's just so much pleading and desperation in it that I can't help but feel sorry for Nate. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

[xandes]

It's sad that Serena seems to have all these doubts about her relationship with Nate, now that they don't spend much private time together due to the nature of his position. And it was heartbreaking when their baby died, and when Nate asked her if she was leaving him at the end. :(

I know she's just doing her job, but Nate needs to tell that Clara person to shove it.

On a happier note, I love the way you wrote NS's interaction with their kids. Zoey and Theo are adorable ♥

Anyway, looking forward to further instalments of this fic and more NS fics from you! You're an excellent writer :)