Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (20/?)

Nov 09, 2019 00:22

Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, PG-13 for Ch.20
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 5,179

Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of ( Read more... )

sho, writings: fanfic, eyeslikehoney

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tobefree0714 November 18 2019, 17:19:44 UTC
Where to start? Do I say that every single time? I feel like I do, but there is always so much to process. I had to read this like three times to fully grasp it and analyze how I feel about it ( ... )

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amnosxmatsujun December 2 2019, 12:04:16 UTC
Oh you. Your comments always bring a smile to my face. <3 Thank you for always encouraging me to continue writing this series.

It always amazes me how, with each chapter, it seems you are finding more of yourself in the characters. You’ve told me before that you feel I’m writing this fanfic for you, and that’s truly a humbling comment. Ban-chan possesses such a pure and kind soul that you really want to cheer for him. The two men are so different. Like you said, has Kokoro ever been completely comfortable with Sho? Meanwhile, her relationship with Ban-chan feels calm and peaceful. I think that’s a manifestation of what he wants in an ideal relationship.

Sigh! He won...! How will all this unfold? Ch.21 is ready for you to read. <3

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meikyuu808 November 28 2019, 02:55:01 UTC
Hi! I saw your notification on Twitter that Chapter 19 was of your fanfic was ready so out of curiosity I read the first paragrah and decided to read from the beginning! OMG your writing is just so amazing! I was on an emotional roller coaster with each chapter I read; just like being on an emotional roller coaster with recent Arashi news! I don't know how much my heart can take! I love the way you put so much detail in every scene and character development. You commented once that you are a visual writer; well, I'm a visual reader (if that makes sense). Your writing allows me to see this story unfold in my mind and I'm really enjoying it! Btw, I wasn't surprised that Sho won the contest, but I was really suprised that he entered the kitchen photo instead of the ones he took at the beach. But I do believe that he chose the right photo; to be it represents their relationship and how happy both of them were in that particular moment of time (so romantic, so intimate 'sigh'). I just hope Sho and Kokoro can get back together again ( ... )

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amnosxmatsujun December 2 2019, 12:16:53 UTC
Thank you so much for taking the time to read the whole series! There are readers who’ve been with me since day 1, and there are others, like yourself, who happened to stumble upon an update and decided to give my writing a chance. I really appreciate your encouragement. My readers truly fuel me to continue writing, and your comment was a humbling one. It makes me happy to that it was exciting for you to read, because I put a lot of effort in painting the scenery, and character and plot development. I want each chapter to read like a drama episode, so to speak ( ... )

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