Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (20/?)

[amnosxmatsujun]

Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, PG-13 for Ch.20
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 5,179

Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of

Comments

[meikyuu808]

Hi! I saw your notification on Twitter that Chapter 19 was of your fanfic was ready so out of curiosity I read the first paragrah and decided to read from the beginning! OMG your writing is just so amazing! I was on an emotional roller coaster with each chapter I read; just like being on an emotional roller coaster with recent Arashi news! I don't know how much my heart can take! I love the way you put so much detail in every scene and character development. You commented once that you are a visual writer; well, I'm a visual reader (if that makes sense). Your writing allows me to see this story unfold in my mind and I'm really enjoying it! Btw, I wasn't surprised that Sho won the contest, but I was really suprised that he entered the kitchen photo instead of the ones he took at the beach. But I do believe that he chose the right photo; to be it represents their relationship and how happy both of them were in that particular moment of time (so romantic, so intimate 'sigh'). I just hope Sho and Kokoro can get back together again. I truly believe Kokoro can help him find happiness just like he did for her. To me, they were meant to be together, although I am wondering if it will happen as I cannot forget what he said when they parted: "If only I could hold on to you a little while longer". Does this mean he knew he would have to let her go someday? Anyway, enough of my ramblings, I look forward to another chapter. Thank you so much for writing such a great story and keep up the good work!

[amnosxmatsujun]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read the whole series! There are readers who’ve been with me since day 1, and there are others, like yourself, who happened to stumble upon an update and decided to give my writing a chance. I really appreciate your encouragement. My readers truly fuel me to continue writing, and your comment was a humbling one. It makes me happy to that it was exciting for you to read, because I put a lot of effort in painting the scenery, and character and plot development. I want each chapter to read like a drama episode, so to speak.

I’m intrigued to read that what surprised you was not Sho winning the contest, but what picture he chose. As you mentioned, it’s the intimacy of the captured moment that makes it so special. Their relationship seemed one-sided at first, with Sho healing her wounds and helping her gain confidence. Turns out, Kokoro had a big role in the relationship as well.

How will all this unfold? Ch.21 is ready to read if you’re interested in continuing the fanfic!

P.S. By the way, this is how I tell my readers the next chapter is up: I reply to their comment on the previous chapter. So, if you get a reply from me, consider it a notice for the next chapter ;)