everybody's wearing a disguise, to hide what they've got left behind their eyes;

Jan 14, 2010 15:22

title: Ulysses & the Sea
pairing/characters: Turkey/Greece; mini-cameos by Egypt, England, France, Russia, and Japan
rating: PG-15, about
summary: The Ottoman Empire is crumbling, and Greece- neither against his will nor in the rapid flow of conscience- comes to an ailing Turkey's aid. [gift for absynthess at the myths_n_legends Secret Santa exchange]
time frame: takes ( Read more... )

♦character: greece, *gift, ♦character: turkey, ☆fanfic, ♥pairing: turkey/greece, !fandom: axis powers hetalia, ♠oneshot

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tupelo_thief January 14 2010, 21:27:32 UTC
WIN WIN WIN B|. dude, this was fuckin OSSIM. i'd point out all the awesome, but thad be like the whole fic, so just a few things -

"looking out at the sea with the vague stamp of a grin, a blade over his features"

"That house, heavy as honey with useless pride, always dark in the shadows of the morning; and the man inside it- alone- his darkflower grin and his heart with its uneven beat, trying to keep it all together."

"Hm," Russia laughed. Russia had always talked like an old friend, and at this point maybe Greece was in the danger of considering him one"

fuckin LOVED it B|

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im the truth, why would i lie inuyashacooks January 14 2010, 21:31:51 UTC
HOHOHOHO DO YOU ?!?!?! BAHHHH thats ossim thank youuu :DDDD i was worrying that i was being so dramatic and yeah but thank youuu :DDDDD

yanno what i was thinkin the other day? a genie would be liek the best sidekick ever, because when youre being a superhero and kicking somebodys ass they look up through bruises etc and they see the ridiculous image of a GENIE smiling down on them. it increases the FML factor a millionfold. *nods wisely and strokes beard*

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Re: im the truth, why would i lie tupelo_thief January 14 2010, 21:37:00 UTC
YOU
FUCKING
WUD

you know when you sed "genie" i thot you were going to relate that to turkey. but you didnt. but i think you should. as in he gets fooled into buying a genie lamp from...LOL EGYPT (bc his best friend wud do that to him) and greece is amazed that hes still surprised by turkeys stupidity.

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Re: im the truth, why would i lie inuyashacooks January 14 2010, 21:42:55 UTC
HAHAHAHAHA "WTF IS WRONG WITH THIS THING >B| EGYPT WTF" egypt: "...youre the one who bought it." "THERE WAS SPOST T BE A GENIE IN IT." "never said that." greece: "you...are just...amazingly retarded."

yanno what else struck me? (feel free to kill me on this one.) here's the scene: dead summer; us, in convertible, with top down, cruising the hood with the volume all the way up. playing paris is indeed splendid.

is that not one of my best ideas ever? nobody in the hood would fuck with us cuz that song is fucking terrifying. LOL another song thats terrifying is cicilerini because like its a good song but lets just say that if my neighbors heard that theyd shit their pants and call the police. bound to strike fear into the hearts of many. true story. *claps hands, is a sultan* /whats with all the near east imagery /it's because of the blind owl

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frostberrytea January 14 2010, 22:50:00 UTC
Ah, so lovely and sharp and prickly sweet. I didn't think it was overly dramatic at all, it was just right for these two. I'm just going to go reread it and sigh happily.

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inuyashacooks January 14 2010, 22:54:07 UTC
awwwww man thanks :DDDDD! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D and that its not overdramatic XD *sometimes goes into weird squick phases with writing*

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disownmereturns January 16 2010, 15:03:58 UTC
My word, this is gorgeous. ;A; You took these two to a whole new level! ♥

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inuyashacooks January 16 2010, 15:29:30 UTC
:'D bahhhh thank you!!! I'm glad you liked!

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demikkusuu January 16 2010, 23:53:46 UTC
have my fucking babies.
this was damn beautiful
the only way i can express how fucking wonderful it is is through vulgar words

when coherency comes back, i'll leave a longer message that's less fretted with aspersions
but
FUCK! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL

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inuyashacooks January 17 2010, 01:54:40 UTC
*accepts e-children* :DDD bahhh thanks so much!!! I'm glad you liked it and I really appreciate it :D and don't worry I fuckin love vulgarity. in its own way it's very eloquent XD

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moirae January 17 2010, 20:45:18 UTC
Oh my god, I love you so much for this &hearts

The way you incorporated all of the history was absolutely beautiful, your characterizations were perfect, and the dynamic between Turkey and Greece was an absolute pleasure to read.

This is seriously the best present ever. Thank you so much!

/goes to reread

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inuyashacooks January 17 2010, 21:03:44 UTC
:DDDD bahhh I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!! I really enjoyed writing it and have t thank you for the awesome prompt ;D happy belated holidays!

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