My Baby, which still doesn't have a title

[amirynn]

Title: Untitled
Disclaimer: Do I look like I can draw? 'Course 's not my creation..
Warnings: Eventual Kyoya/Haruhi, and set in the post-grad-school future. Which means I'll probably have some manga spoilage in it. I don't really watch the anime, so it's just manga spoilers I'm obligated to warn about. ;P
Notes: It's starting to roll... Still

Comments

[t_zou]

wow the energetic type huh.. and a real opposite of Haruhi.. well that sure is a weird partner for Kyoya.

[amirynn]

Isn't that the point? ;)

[cerhiby]

ah, so if that's the case then he's just using his fiancee as a distraction from haruhi. if he got another intelligent lady it'll only remind him of haruhi. so he go for the hyperactive type ;o.

[amirynn]

Mmm, I know what you mean; Alice really is too nice and too clueless for the company she's now choosing to mingle with, ne? And you really can't dislike her precisely because of those two attributes~! lol

And, in regars to this

Do we find out what was 'resounding' later? Or should I have known (and if so, can you fill me in)?

Well, I didn't really intend to come back to that; mostly, while I was proofing this installment, I decided that the paragraph was way too long and cropped it where it would make the most impact. It worked out nicely; what I have now is a lot more true to the mood I've been building than the original... ^^;;; But, I guess I can give you the ending in full, anyway...

"Thanks, Kyoya." Her headache builds and she knows he's either laughing or disappointed that she refuses to look at him. She pushes the button for the elevator and, in the time she has to think, resolutely ignores the resounding ache building in her chest. Haruhi likes to pretend that everything she feels is fiction; it is a lot easier to

[amirynn]

Heh, it's ok, I totally get what you're saying. ^^ It's the exact reasoning behind why I chose to cut off the paragraph where I did, lol.

[cerhiby]

oho i like how they met w/ that note-giving act on him ::D i thought thye're going to have a secret meeting after that but i didnt saw one... oh well. :D

and yeah, i liek that friendship w/ nekozawa ;D but how did he get into the board? i mean what is his position? (coz we dont know what he is capable of other than black magic stuff)

hmm... i'd like to see more how she live with the twins *________* :D

[amirynn]

Well, I put Nekozawa into the meeting as a representative for a Russian conglomerate which is associated with the company she is in France to negotiate with [take over =P]. I have a whole history for him drawn out, but... It probably won't ever get addressed. ^^;;

[cerhiby]

ooh, that's kind of refreshing ;D i'm guess it's alright to not put his history coz it'll take the spotlight away fr. the main characters and plot. ;D

[iwriteparallels]

*squees*

I've been waiting for this installment and now I'm already impatient for the next one.

This fic is just wonderful. I love how you portray their relationships with one another.

[amirynn]

♥ WHEE! I'm glad you enjoyed~!

[lunnera]

I am really enjoying this story!