My Baby, which still doesn't have a title

[amirynn]

Title: Untitled
Disclaimer: Do I look like I can draw? 'Course 's not my creation..
Warnings: Eventual Kyoya/Haruhi, and set in the post-grad-school future. Which means I'll probably have some manga spoilage in it. I don't really watch the anime, so it's just manga spoilers I'm obligated to warn about. ;P
Notes: It's starting to roll... Still

Comments

[amirynn]

Mmm, I know what you mean; Alice really is too nice and too clueless for the company she's now choosing to mingle with, ne? And you really can't dislike her precisely because of those two attributes~! lol

And, in regars to this

Do we find out what was 'resounding' later? Or should I have known (and if so, can you fill me in)?

Well, I didn't really intend to come back to that; mostly, while I was proofing this installment, I decided that the paragraph was way too long and cropped it where it would make the most impact. It worked out nicely; what I have now is a lot more true to the mood I've been building than the original... ^^;;; But, I guess I can give you the ending in full, anyway...

"Thanks, Kyoya." Her headache builds and she knows he's either laughing or disappointed that she refuses to look at him. She pushes the button for the elevator and, in the time she has to think, resolutely ignores the resounding ache building in her chest. Haruhi likes to pretend that everything she feels is fiction; it is a lot easier to deal with life that way. Besides, she is so close to moving on, especially now that she knows that Kyoya truly has as well. Her breath hitches, and she forces herself to stop thinking.

The doors slip open, and she is more than happy to walk in and let them close behind her.

[amirynn]

Heh, it's ok, I totally get what you're saying. ^^ It's the exact reasoning behind why I chose to cut off the paragraph where I did, lol.