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International "How the heck did I get that bruise??" Day!

Jan 19, 2007 11:36

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SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, no spoilers ltlj January 20 2007, 03:23:11 UTC

Title: Orientation by ltljAtlantis was expecting their check-in in about six hours, but the Ancient pulse-field or whatever the hell it was had taken out their radios. John didn't want another jumper flying unwarned into this area, especially a jumper piloted by another natural Ancient gene carrier, and Ronon thought he could make it back to the gate before the check-in time. So John sent him off, told Teyla to keep an eye on Rodney, then crawled into the back of the cave to die ( ... )

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 2 ltlj January 20 2007, 03:25:00 UTC

Teyla gritted her teeth. "I do not want to make it worse. He is in there because he does not want us to see him like this. He will not listen to me, perhaps he will listen to you ( ... )

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 03:26:33 UTC

Finally Sheppard stirred reluctantly, shoving himself up and holding out a hand. Rodney lunged forward with Teyla, they both grabbed Sheppard and dragged him out. Sheppard rolled into a sitting position, blinked, said, "I can't--" and then fell over. Rodney caught him, tried to ease him down. Sheppard tried to help, and after a little inadvertent wrestling match, Rodney ended up with Sheppard hunched over and collapsed in his lap. "Oof," Rodney commented a little breathlessly. "I'm going to assume that punch in the stomach was accidental ( ... )

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 jackycomelately January 20 2007, 04:04:52 UTC

"John warily tightened his grip on the rock."

Hee!

"Yes, we did, now get in there and be comforting." Teyla gave him an unnecessary shove.

You gotta love Rodney forced to be comforting!

Rodney frowned, considering it. "So what do we do about that?"

Awww! Rodney wanting to make John all better.

Love this!

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 20:38:42 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it!

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 sweeneybird January 20 2007, 04:12:59 UTC

"With the spiky black hair even more disheveled than ever, and his eyes green in the dim light, he looked like an angry feral elf."

::loves::

Nicely done!

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 20:39:32 UTC

Thanks! :)

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 pentapus January 20 2007, 04:19:17 UTC

Rodney being distracted by the hotness of his particular crushes always gets a win.

Also, "We're moving you. For god's sake, don't try to help." Rodney was hilarious in this (as was Sheppard falling all over the place), and John's need to hold onto them with one hand to stay grounded was spectacularly adorable. YAY.

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 20:41:01 UTC

Thanks! For some weird reason this was kind of hard to write, but I'm glad I finally finished it.

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 minnow1212 January 20 2007, 04:56:00 UTC

I love your Teyla so much. (I love all of your characters so much, but here, your Teyla especially.)

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 20:37:08 UTC

Thanks very much!

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 seperis January 20 2007, 05:08:52 UTC

FERAL ELF! OH MY GOD YES.

All of it was fun. Teyla being firm, Rodney doing his best at that comforting thing, and it is never not cute to see Rodney beign a reluctant gentlemen when his crushes fall across his lap and cuddle him. This is *fun*.

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 20:38:07 UTC

Thanks! :) I really need to make a feral elf icon now.

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Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 ltlj January 20 2007, 20:36:36 UTC

Thanks!

Ronon, gazelle. Hee.

It's those long legs of his. :)

Re: SGA, John, Rodney, Teyla, PG13, part 3 wojelah January 20 2007, 05:36:45 UTC

"With the spiky black hair even more disheveled than ever, and his eyes green in the dim light, he looked like an angry feral elf."

This whole thing is so much happy, but that line? Is just dead on.

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