take my breath away; nichkhun/wooyoung

[dreamoscope]

take my breath away.
nichkhun/wooyoung ; pg-13; 2457w
where nichkhun is resume-perfect and wooyoung is an enigmaA/N: I usually write stories backwards, but this one.. sort of just write itself front to back, I was quite surprised. This is so fragmented and characterisation sucks, but i wanted to try Wooyoung in a new characterisation, so this

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[mychocotango]

Omg perfection!

[mychocotango]

Its beyond words. Its soooo you, its sooo khunyoung and everything is beautiful. This definitely going to the 'dreamoscope' fics folder hahaha...
I love everything, oh my heart.. I love how you switch pov to show how they really feeling, how khun suffers, how woo suffers.. ;;A;;
I'm a bad commentator since all I could think of saying was lajdgfjsghfjfgigfujedhjffgdshgdg
But wowowowow you updated and its amazing :')

I don't mind waiting months for your fics marc , cos when its done its glorious ^o^
Thank you for writing this and sharing it <3333

[dreamoscope]

OH UNNIR ;w;
see this was meant to be me torturing khun while i have woo watch it and be all happy.. but i just cant.. then at the end the characterization falls apart cos i just cant.. idk.

daw unnirrrrrrrrrrrr. you are too nice to me *___* i am sorreh i am such a slow writer i reread everything like an OCD person that I am. i hate it. kk

[shadow_paint]

I WANT TO CRY YOU BIAAATCHHHHHH SOBBBBBBBFDSFJDLKSAJFLDKAFJLDKA;FDJAS;A

;AAAA; I love how you portrayed the whole struggle between them even though they weren't even near each other for most of the fic. I love your descriptions and how you painted both characters so cleanly and perfectly and I especially love the last bit where everything comes together at last.

Believe me, if I was better at commenting you'd get a much longer reply from me but my emotions are a mess right now so you'd have to live with this ;~~~; I love it i love it i love it. :D

For some reason, "The Only Exception" by Paramore started playing in my head while I was reading this. I'mma go listen to it and cry over your fic again. sobs.

[dreamoscope]

WHY YOU CRAI? its a happy ending ahahhaha. well semi-happy.. but whatever its so open you can think its happy.

OMG tbh i was so disappointed at woo's character, it just seems so flawed cos i wanted to write him into this cold person and then in the end he is still kinda mushy. maybe i shouldn't have done his POV cos its what makes him more human. heh
but omg why your comment is so naisu and constructive *__*

lol i think its probably from that line that khun said he wants to be the exception? but that song is so sad and heartbreaking sobsssss.

thanks for the comment ♥

[shadow_paint]

noooo i love that you made him more human somehow, it just gives double the heartache, y'know?! and makes buck's one even more poignant because you know both of them are aching, instead of it just being one-sided.

and paramore:

"and that was the day i promised i'll never sing of love if it does not exist"

"and up till now i had sworn to myself that i'm content with loneliness, because none of it was ever worth the risk"

"i've got a tight grip on reality but i can't let go of what's in front of me, i know you're leaving in the morning when you wake up, leave me with some kind of proof, it's not a dream"

"you're the only exception, and i'm on my way to believing."

so fitting with your fic, bb. ;~~;

[dreamoscope]

ahhh because khun thinks its a hopeless case but its not? but he doesnt know that and just stays hopeless by himself not knowing woo actually wants to come back? ahhahaha. so its like you're aching for both of them at the same time LOL LOL
idk im so not used making woo the baddie i swear.

sounds like khun's themesong ;w;

[reitachii]

love this foreveeeeeer~ >.

[dreamoscope]

thanks for commenting bb ^__^

[walkonpluto]

i'll forever read everything you write marc. like a loyal dog hahaha. why am i so funneeh

Wooyoung is cold, stubborn and unwavering, unwilling to listen to anything but his own mind, and everyone knows how twisted it is. He has grown up with lies and deceit, spent his childhood questioning everyone’s intentions, and by the time he is an adult, with his delinquent and rebel years over, he welcomes his conman years with open arms. Learning from the past, everything he does is now more calculated and careful, slippery like the sand you couldn’t hold too tight, but ready to disappear into nothing when the wind hits.

gaah. this. this is so nice babe. woo's characterization, even tho different from what you normally write him as, is believable. him being your bias i'm sure you know how he likes to keep to himself like he's afraid to trust others, and it takes everyone long to really get to know the real wooyoung. do i make any sense lol o.O
but yeah, i love him for that ;;~~;; ♥

[dreamoscope]

AND I LOVE YOU FOR THAT. i swear i do ♥

yes, this is probably one of the strangest wooyoung ive ever written and if you realize he kinda goes out of character near the end ahahahah. idk anymore, its hard, cos maybe im too used to having him a certain character, and when i put him to another character it feels different entirely. but it was a nice change though, i think i wanna try write him as different types of AU characters once in a while just to spice things up kkk

i love how it's really hard for wooyoung to properly make friends, like he has this cheerful masks outside but inside he's just afraid to trust others and keep to himself, like his cheery outside is nothing but just a mask kk. but once he does open up to others he'll protect them like treasures *___* ugh my bby

thank you for your lovely comment bb ♥

[emmyxogast]

gahhh. marcy the great uploaded again. brb, yo.

[emmyxogast]

Wooyoung sometimes thinks that he will do a much better job as a zombie, a vampire, a cold blooded killer, or anything inhumane.
dude, i want a AU fic now tbfh. i dun care if it's khunyoung. //grabby hands//

[dreamoscope]

this is a semi AU em baby :PP

[emmyxogast]

but i mean full blown fantasy!au not modern lifeu.