Appealing Only Cause' They're Just That Unappealing

[americanaffair]

Title: Appealing Only Cause' They're Just That Unappealing
Chapter:  1
Author: americanaffair
Beta: earthtomaddy and darkbluerain (Thank you guys so fucking much!)
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: R
POV: 3rd
Summary:
Alex was sitting on the bench, sure this was the last night of his life. Absolutely positive that he would end the rest of his miserable little storybook tonight.

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Comments

[turnthepageover]

I feel a heart being grilled up. I can hear it sizzle.

Ew >.<
Not a pleasant thought. Why would I even say that?

Alex, you filthy animal.
Go home with Jack and get cleaned up.
And then prepare yourself for sexual pleasures.

[americanaffair]

Lololol. I almost called it keep the change, you filthy animal. But that kind of won't make any sense at all.

Truuust me, there will be no preparation, and no pleasures.

[yourenotahero]

I can already tell this is gonna be good.
Sadly, I can picture Jack eating Alex's internal organs.. Bad, bad visual.

[americanaffair]

Oh yay! :3
Hahahaha. I love your imagination more than you know.

[underapaperm00n]

this is amazing oh my god
the wording is so perfect
I don't even know how to express my love for this
wow oh my god

[americanaffair]

<3 Thank you so much! I hope the next chapter is equally good, I have to sit and remind myself that when there are chapters involved I don't have to rush the plot. I'm just so used to cutting straight to the interesting parts.
<3 thanks again sugar

[stayawakeanya]

Okay, this has definitely caught my attention :3
Jacky, yew so noice x3
Love this so far x3
Surprise buttsecks at some point? c;

[americanaffair]

Yay!!! C: I feel like so many new people are commenting! Is so exciting!!
Lol. Surprise buttsecks? I.. suppose you could call it something like that ;)

[alltime_panic]

If Alex doesn't attack Jack and have hot filthy sex with him in the next chapter then he's out of his mind. (After he showers and brushes his teeth of course.)

And yes, that was code for "This is amazing oh my god -fangirling- post more please I love you"

[americanaffair]

*Giggles* Weeelll, I don't want to give away too much, but all I have to say is there's hot filthy sex a bit later. And Alex is a scared little deer baby. With the big eyes and. Just, he's bambi. Call him bambi.

<3333333333333 Thank you so much! I want to, work just kicks my ass so hard.