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Appealing Only Cause' They're Just That Unappealing

Aug 05, 2011 22:05

Title: Appealing Only Cause' They're Just That Unappealing
Chapter: 1
Author: americanaffair
Beta: earthtomaddy and darkbluerain (Thank you guys so fucking much!)
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: R
POV: 3rd
Summary:
Alex was sitting on the bench, sure this was the last night of his life. Absolutely positive that he would end the rest of his miserable little storybook tonight.

Warning ( Read more... )

pairing!jalex, rating:r, content!angst, slash, request

Comments 22

darkbluerain August 6 2011, 13:56:03 UTC

Gahh, I would have been FC if LJ hadn't turned into a douche again last night >.< Anyway...

Girl, you so sweet ;3

I know I just read this, but really, this is so good. You make me have faith in the ATL bandom.

americanaffair August 7 2011, 02:00:59 UTC

Fuck LJ! For rizzle.

<3333

Lol ohmygoodness. *Blushes* you give me so much more credit than I deserve, seriously.

alexgokart August 6 2011, 17:00:24 UTC

Oh God, oh God, okay. It's finally done.
I almost screamed when I saw this was up.
So, I pretty much fucking love this already and I have no idea where this is going to go but I can tell it's going to amazing the fuck out of me.
But I just know that when it gets to the sex, it's gonna be amazing. Because you're the queen of smut.

Urgh I love yoooou.

americanaffair August 7 2011, 02:03:16 UTC

It's.. It's not actually done, I just got so sick of being unsure that I decided to post some and see if it got the reaction I was hoping for. Haha.
Yay! Screamers are awesome ;)
Eeeeee!!! At least you have more insight than other people, some of these comments have me in stitches but I'm not gonna be like "U KNO NUUUTHING AND I KNO EVERRRYYYTHAAANG GIRLFRAND YOU CULDNT ME MOAR WRANG11"
But I, alas, I cannot.
Sexsexsexsexsex. At least I get to write a lot of sex now with the kink diaries *smushes Mena into oblivion*

I love you moreee <333 *licks*

fumbledtouchftw August 6 2011, 23:26:07 UTC

this is awesome! i'm really excited for it! your writing is wonderful (:

americanaffair August 7 2011, 02:05:25 UTC

Thank you! <3 I'm excited too! I don't really like doing chaptered fics (clearly), but this was something that I felt had so much more potential than that I could fit into a one shot. And I feel like if I tried to cram into even a two or three parter, I would've rushed everything... *babbles to myself*

<33333

apodiopsys August 7 2011, 16:19:41 UTC

oh my god your writing is just. it gets to me every single time i don't know how you do it and just omg every single time i sit here for like ten minutes like wow this is amazing and i'd love to know her secret

but yeah enough asskissing i just omg everything you write is amazing and i'm really excited for the next partchapterthing and i'm not usually a big chaptered fic person but this omg y e s

americanaffair August 7 2011, 18:33:17 UTC

My ego wants to fuck you.

I can't even. You. Give me way more credit than I deserve. And. Okay. Thank you doesn't even. Here, here's my virginity, you just, you take it and you keep it.

*Mauls*

apodiopsys August 7 2011, 19:20:49 UTC

i'd let your ego fuck me.

and no omg you deserve all of the credit and just everything and the stars etc etc

americanaffair August 9 2011, 02:37:46 UTC

I'm glad your cool with it, he would've had you been or not, though.

I totally don't though like. Oh my. *blushes*

glassh0uses August 7 2011, 19:45:11 UTC

oh my god your writing makes me want to touch myself okay hello I am excited for the next part

americanaffair August 9 2011, 02:30:50 UTC

Ahem. "I called her on the phooone and she touched herself. She touched herself. She touuuuuuched herself."

As you should be! Prep yo motha fuckiin diaphragm because this shit is literally going to stick its dink in your pink.