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snapes_angel May 18 2011, 12:47:34 UTC
:thumbsup:

And yea, I remember those days, although we used a cinderblock bookcase. <,< Rather than TV stand, I mean.

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ambrmerlinus May 21 2011, 17:09:26 UTC
I think it's mostly just character-building, but if there's something about it that's really bugging you I'd like to know. You're usually right about these things.

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ambrmerlinus May 24 2011, 19:28:50 UTC
This piece in particular isn't quite a story, but your advice applies to some other stuff I'm working on. Thanks!

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la_mendacia May 24 2011, 16:15:49 UTC
Zwitter's a very weird-looking character. When I just see illustrations of zir dancing around or posing with the crew, I don't get a sense of zir personality- I'm just like 'that is a demon wearing a tutu.'

So I like that I get a few paragraphs to get to know zir. Ze feels more like a fleshed-out character, now.
And I heard once that companies pour bleach on their thrown-out food, because there have been people who sued the companies they dumpstered from, after they picked up and ate spoiled food. I don't know if that's true, it's just another theory I've heard.

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