Comments | amazonx: OK, this is new for me

amazonx

OK, this is new for me

Nov 02, 2008 17:58

This is a WIP. It's something my Auntie Ursula asked for, so here it is. She was the idea for the story, and she wanted it as WIP. I want constructive feedback. I want honest opinons. Gushing and cash awards are also welcome. Oh, and there's no way I'd be able to complete NaNoWriMo. I mean, yeah, I type 50 WPM, that's about 3000 WPH, but....you ( Read more... )

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ursula4x November 2 2008, 23:14:18 UTC

You still have it. I love this Alex. I hope Mulder keeps being supportive. And your Walter is the sexiest ever.

amazonx November 2 2008, 23:27:09 UTC

you read the whole thing? For reals?

ursula4x November 2 2008, 23:29:21 UTC

Well, yeah!you read the whole thing? For reals?

I read too quickly when I like something. It ticks me off because it's like a really good ice cream. You devour it and then it's all gone.

amazonx November 2 2008, 23:35:28 UTC

So, a direction? Halp! I not a riter!

inlaterdays November 2 2008, 23:16:13 UTC

I love love love it! I read the whole thing with a big grin on my face. MORE PLEASE!

(The references to Elton John and J. Edgar Hoover were womderful :D)

amazonx November 2 2008, 23:27:34 UTC

OK, I kinda need more than that, tho...

ursula4x November 2 2008, 23:32:51 UTC

Well, if you're looking for wish lists, I'd love to stay with this set up a long time, Alex, young innocent, the background in computers. Walter, strong, lonely, and coming out of a bad marriage.

If you want to connect with canon, then I'd like to see Alex volunteering to go inside after he and Walter become lovers.

amazonx November 2 2008, 23:37:10 UTC

you think? I had a totally AU idea...weird, eh?

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seagray November 3 2008, 01:57:43 UTC

I think it's a wonderful premise--green, lovestruck Skippy, wiseass, preceptive but understanding Mulder, and the sortof unknown: strong, professional, marriage-on-the-outs Skinner ( ... )

amazonx November 3 2008, 02:44:33 UTC

You gave me some great ideas, thank you! I had a few good ones.

Glad you decided to go AU ursula4x November 3 2008, 02:48:08 UTC

We can be your cheering squad as you pound the pages out.

Re: Glad you decided to go AU amazonx November 3 2008, 02:50:42 UTC

I would really love that!

ladymidath November 3 2008, 11:28:05 UTC

Amazon, this is brilliant, I am loving this so much. I love sweet Alex Krycek, mischevious Mulder and hotter than hell Skinner. Reading this has made me so glad that I logged on today. :-)

amazonx November 3 2008, 16:12:28 UTC

Yeah, this is my NaNoWriMo and I'm really motivated! Even tho it took me 4 tries to spell motivated.