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Nov 24, 2008 20:43

Title: Five Times Sirius Thought Remus Might Actually Kill Him, Possibly With The Power of His Mind (a.k.a., A Series of Sirius Mistakes, No Pun Actually Intended, Although Come To Think of It Moony That Would Have Been Quite Funny-)
Rating: PG?
Pairings/Characters: Sirius and Remus, with mentions of most of the other characters you might expect.
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This may be... only semi-coherent. LOLZ I NEED SLEEP. anothersaturday November 25 2008, 11:31:30 UTC
...but the overall point is supposed to be that I really enjoyed this fic. A lot! It is fantastic. Seriously, I always love how you write them, but this is quite possibly my favorite of every Marauders fic of yours I've ever read.

GAH.

OKAY. COMMENTS:

The first segment! I love that Sirius is fanboying astrophysics! Because, you know, canonically he's supposed to be all clever and it kills me that 99% of all Sirius fics seem to forget that fact, but Sirius reading about astrophysics and basically reacting like "OMGSQUEE GIANT EXPLOSIONS!" seems like such a perfect way to convey that he is a) really smart, but also b) a complete doofus who really likes it when things blow up. THIS MAKES MY INNER SIRIUS FANGIRL SO VERY HAPPY.

"Did I?" Remus asked.

"Desperately," Sirius said.
Ahahaha, Sirius! I am LOLing over the fact that, in his mind, shoving a friend into the lake is a totally justifiable course of action.

(If, indeed the above did happen, the obvious conclusion would clearly be: Sirius suggested that Remus procure ( ... )

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bredalot November 25 2008, 21:02:42 UTC
Yay, Five Things! Yay, quoting me! :P

Ahahaha, purple hair. :D And James moping. Dire threat indeed.

And I love your take on the Incident of the Whomping Willow that They Do Not Talk About. (I also like capitalization. Could you tell?) It takes the style that's been blossoming through the other parts, that random unfinished overlong sentence structure, and makes it useful.

Um. Fun! I never really know what to say about silly little things like this, other than that I liked it, so there you go. :D

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cherryfeather November 28 2008, 22:47:15 UTC
This is Utterly Fantastic on many, many levels. Really. I love your rambly-Sirius!voice. Poor Remus for having to put up with him. (YAY ASTROPHYSICS btw.) I love your take on the Prank. It's very, very Sirius, to be defensive like that. I absolutely adore this.

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dollsome July 2 2009, 02:34:58 UTC
Don't mind me while I continue to so belatedly binge upon your fanfic! Oh, man, this was a delight! Seldom have I seen Very Emphatic Capitalization used to such fantastic comedic effect, bwahaha! (James Potter's Left Shoe, a.k.a., The Artist Formerly Known As A Spectacularly Impressive Dung Bomb. ♥) And then the last section is so simple and it just HITS you. Wonderfully, wonderfully done, my friend!

... gosh darnit, you are making me nostalgic for all the fine things in life, like Ryan/Kelly and Harry Potter.

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amazingly_me July 2 2009, 07:24:05 UTC
Don't mind me while I am totally filled with glee by your fic bingeing! I love, um, everything of yours I have EVER READ EVER, so it is like my inbox is just being filled with overwhelming joy, haha.

Seldom have I seen Very Emphatic Capitalization used to such fantastic comedic effect, bwahaha!

I loooooove Very Emphatic Capitalization. I rather suspect I overuse it! I know I relied on it for at least one other HP story, and maybe an Office one. It's one of my go-tos for humor. :P

Wonderfully, wonderfully done, my friend!

Well thank you! :]

... gosh darnit, you are making me nostalgic for all the fine things in life, like Ryan/Kelly and Harry Potter.

Whenever I can remind someone of life's finer things, I take immense pride in doing so. ;]

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