Awwww, that's so wibbly! All your Tim stuff was fantastic - "bat-adjectives" and "angsted his way into the room" and every description of his posture and everything is so achingly lonely, oh Timmy. It makes sense that after so much loss he can't believe he hadn't lost Cassie and Kon again.
One betaish opinion - I think your time frames were a bit too long. I kept thinking "Cassie didn't go find Tim even days after he walked out? Kon just let Tim be all weird for months?" I dunno, maybe that's just my personality, if I'm concerned about someone I tend to track them down immediately to fix things, but it seemed off for such good friends to let Tim go all crazy angsty for so long.
Hmm, I didn't think I put many time frames in. While Kon is convalescing - and not allowed to leave S.T.A.R. Labs - and Cassie has school, Tim is making himself scarce. There's really no reason for either of them to track him down because A) Kon can't go look for him. B) He's not talking to Cassie, but he is talking to Kon, and C) Presumably he's at the Tower each weekend, just making sure he's nowhere near Cassie.
apology in advance for the length...just_liketoffeeJanuary 16 2008, 00:35:41 UTC
I loveee your stories. I've read almsot all of them, or all of the ones with pairings I support, or can see happening. Your eye for characterization is amazing. ANd I love the way you portray emotions, and humour in descriptions to stop a story from getting too dark or angsty. It's a great balance
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Re: apology in advance for the length...amarin_roseJanuary 16 2008, 00:45:54 UTC
I don't often write multi-chaptered anything, and while I am rather fond of this threesome, and would like to write an established relationship story for them, I can't say whether or not it will happen. I do know this trio appears in a story I'm writing now; they're not the main focus, however. They also appear breifly in a multi-chaptered cross-dimensional Tim/Kon fic I've been writing forever.
I know, right? I got more than 3 pages worth of bunnies at this point (and I think they're making more while I'm not looking!). Now I just let other people choose which I should do. @_@ You're welcome!
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One betaish opinion - I think your time frames were a bit too long. I kept thinking "Cassie didn't go find Tim even days after he walked out? Kon just let Tim be all weird for months?" I dunno, maybe that's just my personality, if I'm concerned about someone I tend to track them down immediately to fix things, but it seemed off for such good friends to let Tim go all crazy angsty for so long.
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Love it!
I love your Tim and Kon and you even made me like Cassie, which isn't easy.
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