Static

[amara_anon]

Title: Static
Genres: Horror/Angst
Rating: M
Warnings: blood & gore
Spoilers: up to manga ch. 471
Word Count: 1,827
Note: Written for angelic_arrow at iy_flashfic.
Summary: With Tenseiga useless, Sesshomaru must protect Rin, Jaken, and Kohaku from death. There would be no second chances...

Comments

[carrie2004]

Ohhhh.That was VERY cool! :D

[qing_yun]

Wonderful. It certainly compelled me to think. To live in halcyon eternity...interesting concept. Hee hee. ^_^ Sess-Mama is love!

(Renata)

P.S. My insalubrious fascination with the macabre will be the end of me one day.

strange

[gen50]

i didnt think he would be susceptible to fancy
.. but the mind does strange things
nicely spun... nice finesse

Re: strange

[amara_anon]

Thanks, I don't usually write this sort of thing. Don't know if I pulled it off.

Re: strange

[gen50]

depends on the reader...

i think he will realize, and realize it soon enough
his character is too strong to remain in the delusion
but then, you never said how long the delusion was to remain ...

so this piece is in-between shock and realization
and not about real time as we know it...

Re: strange

[_blackthorne_]

YOu have to feel sorry for him, though.

[_blackthorne_]

OH, man! This was really good!
Oh I must ask....can I have it for my site? CAn I, can I?!

It was creepy but at the same time, very different.
BUT CREEPY!

[amara_anon]

Sure, you can put it on your site. Thanks for commenting.

[_blackthorne_]

YES!

[withered_spring]

Ummm... just wandered in and I know it's been a while since this was posted, but can I saying I fucking love this?

I do. Really really.

[amara_anon]

Thanks.