Bubbles on the Water - Chapter 5 (Ohmiya)

[am1thirteenth]

BUBBLES ON THE WATER
Multi-chaptered
An Ohmiya Fan-fiction (嵐)
By: Ami
Beta-reader: beastlover

Standard disclaimers apply.

UNBETA-ED VERSION (My dear beta Elizabeth is going to fix my mistakes very soon!)

Beta-ed!

5. Chapter Five

Satou-san is a loving grandfather with three absolutely adorable grandchildren. Miki-chan loves melon bread, Mako-chan eats

Comments

[sheranino]

Kewl!!!

I like bratty-over-confidence Nino. Soo him.

Come on, Ohno's parents, OPEN YOUR EYES!!! Ohmiya might as well get married for their own good!!

Nice chappie ^_________^

[am1thirteenth]

lol i love bratty Nino too (i remember watching Ultra Strong Game, in which this brat said, 'i can finish the challenge in 20 seconds', and he did just that, magnificently!)
well without parents' blessings, ohmiya can always elope anyway XD

[sheranino]

elope.
what a perfect idea. LOL

Yep, the USG thing. Nino was such a competitive person, ne?
I guess he wouldn't let go Ohno easy in this story.
I bet he'd fight for him :D

[lilshokolatte22]

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.

THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS MUCH!!! (multiplied by 1000000000!)

this is recently my favorite ohmiya story!

aaaahhhhhhhhhh, i can't WAIT to read more! i loved your characterizations to pieces <3 i was originally upset at ohno-papa for talking about "gay" and whatnot, but then he had the idea of actually marrying for love and then i loved him!! haha! and ohno-mama!!! CAN'T YOU SEE?? nino IS perfect for satoshi!! ^___^

i want more of this storyyyyyyyy!! <3333

[am1thirteenth]

awww you're so sweet! It's really nice to know that someone nice like you read this story. <3 Just reading your comment, i feel refreshed to write more in a hot day like this. :3
lol let's hope that ohno-papa gives his blessings or let's just get our boys to elope XD

[thefrug]

I love it~ The conversation with Ohno's dad at the end was slightly heartbreaking; because of the fact that he was opposed to the arranged marriage! I can't wait to read more!!
<333
Shan

[am1thirteenth]

it's nice to know that you're still following this story! :3 thanks for the compliment. <3 i'm currently working on the next chapter while waiting for my beta to return from her vacation.

[amtopm_xx]

I literally went 'Awww!' when it was over. lol. I was so caught up in it that I wasn't expecting it to end! That shows that you've got an awesome story here. I'm loving this plotline. It's awesome. Keep it up!

[am1thirteenth]

Thank you! :3
I wish I could write longer chapters, but then it would take an even longer time to update. XD I'll do my best for the next chapter! Thanks again, you just made me smile. ^________^

[ulilulelo]

aaa love this :)
this is a RLY nice chapter !!
come on ohno parents,, just let them together~~
can't wait to see the rest <3

[am1thirteenth]

Thank you so much! <3333 Your comment is so full of raburabu. *hugs*