BUBBLES ON THE WATER
Multi-chaptered
An Ohmiya Fan-fiction (嵐)
By: Ami
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UNBETA-ED VERSION (My dear beta Elizabeth is going to fix my mistakes very soon!)
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5. Chapter Five
Satou-san is a loving grandfather with three absolutely adorable grandchildren. Miki-chan loves melon bread, Mako-chan eats
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♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ THIS SO MUCH!!!
Ohno-papa )8<
Ohno-mama kinda making things worse but not realizing it DX ;___;
..... ILU for this story ♥
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*hugs*
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<333
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i love the way ohchan draws nino a lot...and he isn't bored..at all! XD
ohhhh,hope his father will accept nino...cos he wants ohchan to choose his wife on his own..
want to read next chappy..XD
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i'll be looking forward to you in the next chapter!
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HAHA Aiba and Sho. XD So cute. I can just imagine the whole scene going through my head.
Great chapter! Write moar! :DD *Bites you for extra effect* XD
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i usually do the biting, but because you're so sweet you have my permission to bite me! :3
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*Bites some more* XDD Aww you're sweeter~ <3
I'll only bite people I love.. :D *Continues biting* XD
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Pardon the caps. It's just too cute that it deserves a lot CAPS! <333333
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