Bubbles on the Water - Chapter 5 (Ohmiya)

[am1thirteenth]

BUBBLES ON THE WATER
Multi-chaptered
An Ohmiya Fan-fiction (嵐)
By: Ami
Beta-reader: beastlover

Standard disclaimers apply.

UNBETA-ED VERSION (My dear beta Elizabeth is going to fix my mistakes very soon!)

Beta-ed!

5. Chapter Five

Satou-san is a loving grandfather with three absolutely adorable grandchildren. Miki-chan loves melon bread, Mako-chan eats

Comments

[jamasunda]

FIRST! *goes to read*

[jamasunda]

OMG

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ THIS SO MUCH!!!

Ohno-papa )8<
Ohno-mama kinda making things worse but not realizing it DX ;___;
..... ILU for this story ♥

[am1thirteenth]

lol i love the way you comment first to claim the first place! that's just too adorable! <3 thank you for following this story to this chapter!
*hugs*

[jamasunda]

I do my best. XD

<333

[chakko_89]

aww!! the development of nino's strategy with ohchan's mom is good!!!

i love the way ohchan draws nino a lot...and he isn't bored..at all! XD

ohhhh,hope his father will accept nino...cos he wants ohchan to choose his wife on his own..

want to read next chappy..XD

[am1thirteenth]

thank you for coming back! :3 I noticed Oh-chan's clay figures all have the same face so of course he won't get bored with Nino's pretty face! XD
i'll be looking forward to you in the next chapter!

[haruchaan]

AAAAWWWWWW NINO! <33 Nino, you'd no doubt make the BEST son-in-law for the Ohno household. :D So Ohno-papa, I know you're shocked and everything but please hurry up and stop the omiai and marry your son off to Nino. XDD LOL

HAHA Aiba and Sho. XD So cute. I can just imagine the whole scene going through my head.
Great chapter! Write moar! :DD *Bites you for extra effect* XD

[am1thirteenth]

lol haruchaaan you're back! *hugs* it has been so long (although it's kinda my fault for not updating) XD
i usually do the biting, but because you're so sweet you have my permission to bite me! :3

[haruchaan]

*Grins at the permission*

*Bites some more* XDD Aww you're sweeter~ <3
I'll only bite people I love.. :D *Continues biting* XD

[am1thirteenth]

I LOVE YOUR ICON OMG WHERE DID YOU BUY GET IT FROM?
Pardon the caps. It's just too cute that it deserves a lot CAPS! <333333

[jonna594]

God, this story is so good! I want more!!

[am1thirteenth]

wow, thank you! of course there will be more because i'm still so obsessed with Ohmiya. :3

[am1thirteenth]

why, thank you for coming back! <3 i had a hard time imagining what sort of household Oh-chan has (since he mostly talked about his mom). XD I seriously want to see Oh-chan's parents but i couldn't find their pics anywhere~