Comments | alwayseven: Fic - When the Day is New (Liam/Louis, PG13)

alwayseven

Fic - When the Day is New (Liam/Louis, PG13)

Jul 22, 2012 18:06

When the Day is New
One Direction
Liam/Louis
PG13
2400+ words
Note: written for kiss bingo and the "honeymoon" square. Title from Wouldn't it Be Nice by the Beach Boys. Because.

Louis and Liam on their honeymoon. I blame harriet_vane and her Liam/Louis feels.

( When the Day is New )

one direction, kiss bingo, fic

Comments 13

harriet_vane July 22 2012, 22:56:20 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

MOST PERFECT AND HAPPY THING TO EVER BE PEFECT AND HAPPY

MY FACE IS LIKE :D

AND LIKE. OH MY GOD. SO GORGEOUS. I MIGHT CRY????????????

Sorry about all the feels OH WAIT NOT SORRY AT ALL.

alwayseven July 22 2012, 23:14:20 UTC

OH RACHEL RACHEL RACHEL.

I don't think I had considered Liam/Louis until you and now I'm like LIAM+LOUIS FOREVER PLEASE.

Thanks for this most amazing comment, I am so happy and pleased as punch that you like it.

harriet_vane July 23 2012, 00:19:56 UTC

I am just glad you know that I am a person who is capable of real sentences or I would have felt REALLY WEIRD about that comment, but... that is how I feel.

(They are the cutest, they FIX each other, it gives me all the feelings.)

skiptothelu July 22 2012, 23:18:42 UTC

My God, the feeling!!!!!!! I can't contain them! I'm flailing through my love for this. I wish there was another 12k, it was that wonderful. Ugh, I love it. All of it, the fact that it wasn't perfect bliss, but realistic at the same time. Wonderful!

alwayseven July 23 2012, 00:28:08 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I had so many feelings when I was writing this, I had to restrain myself from sending it even more over the top. :D

skiptothelu July 23 2012, 00:47:45 UTC

Haha. I know what you mean. I usually stick with angst, but when I get to the fluffier side of things, I always feel like I'm going too far because I'm always hurting them and tearing them apart! You should consider writing another side bit to this (if the inspiration finds you, of course), just like a tidbit into what happens at some point after they leave, you know? I'd be interested in seeing that.

estrella30 July 22 2012, 23:46:58 UTC

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alwayseven July 23 2012, 00:28:57 UTC

YAY YAY YAY!!!!

I had a little nerves posting it because it's fluffy and sappy and I usually just write porn, but I'm so so happy you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

jennifer_95 July 23 2012, 18:36:28 UTC

This is so so so so so so cute!!!!

emmihey July 23 2012, 18:37:35 UTC

this was so sweet and cute and lovely aw <3