Comments | alwayseven: The Ones You Call Home (3/3)

alwayseven

The Ones You Call Home (3/3)

Jun 27, 2009 11:51

Master Post

part one | part two

( part three )

otp: jon and spencer, big bang 2009, panic at the what, the ones you call home, fic, big bang

Comments 53

anonymous July 1 2009, 06:46:25 UTC

This was an enjoyable read, but the end feels very abrupt. Not only in the context of the Jon/Spencer relationship, but also the tension between Jon and Brendon that was referenced but never resolved.

alwayseven July 1 2009, 13:04:00 UTC

Yeah. *heavy sigh* It was supposed to be a LOT longer, but life happened and it became a rush to finish. You're right, it's a very abrupt end and if I had thought it through a little better, it wouldn't have ended there.

Thank you for reading and for your honest feedback.

inteligrrl July 1 2009, 07:31:50 UTC

omg, this is SO adorable! The only trouble is now I just want more. Anyhow, lovely fic, thanks for sharing!

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:22:59 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

redsnake05 July 1 2009, 07:47:43 UTC

I liked the way you didn't really resolve things and left us with a bunch of possibilities to play with after the fact. I thought your Jon and Spencer were beautifully flawed, very realistic, which was nice.

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:23:52 UTC

Thank you, I really appreciate that because I feel like I let myself (and others) down with how this ended and it's really been bothering me. So thank you for that reassurance :)

And thank you for reading :)

northernveil July 1 2009, 09:55:04 UTC

Wow! This was really hot. You did a great job with the emotional intensity. I loved it!

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:24:37 UTC

Thank you very much :) I'm glad that emotional intensity came through :)

allyndra July 1 2009, 19:20:04 UTC

I thought you did a great job with Jon's emotions. You made his crush on Spencer apparent from the start, without making it unreasonable that Jon was unaware of it. You also made his confusion and ass-holishness feel real and in character. Brendon is incredibly awesome in this, and I really hope he gets his man in the end.

I have to agree with previous commenters that the ending hit hard and fast, but I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing it!

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:26:34 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback.

This was a whole bunch of firsts for me and in some instances it worked and others, obviously not so well.

I'm not sure what to do with Brendon, to be honest. I didn't expect to fall so in love with him.

Thank you again :)