Comments | alwayseven: The Ones You Call Home (3/3)

alwayseven

The Ones You Call Home (3/3)

Jun 27, 2009 11:51

Master Post

part one | part two

( part three )

otp: jon and spencer, big bang 2009, panic at the what, the ones you call home, fic, big bang

Comments 53

strangecobwebs July 1 2009, 03:12:14 UTC

I loved this kind of a lot. Jon! Spencer! BRENDON! <3 I want to hug them all. Also, I sort of can't help being obnoxious and saying that I totally wanted more. I want to hear all about the Halloween party! And Jon and Brendon making up! Basically, I just really enjoyed this. :)

hime2emeh July 1 2009, 09:14:29 UTC

i'm incoherent and speechless and flailing with love for this story so can i just say "i seconded this!" to above comment? :p

*bookmarked*

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:22:31 UTC

Thank you very much for reading :)

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:22:07 UTC

Thank you so much for reading :)

It's okay, you're totally allowed to say you wanted more, I wish I had been able to post the story I originally planned.

sparkfrost July 1 2009, 03:12:35 UTC

This was really sweet! I loved the progression of Jon and Spencer, and everything about Jon and Brendon's relationship was golden.

I would love to see more of this, are you planning to continue?

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:20:03 UTC

Thank you so much, there were a couple of times with Jon and Brendon where I had to remind myself this was about Jon and Spencer. Brendon is just so adorable to me in this.

To be honest, I had planned for this to be a lot longer, like into 4+ months of Jon and Spencer dating, 50,000 words or so. But it was poorly planned. Hopefully I'll be able to do something with the 10,000+ words I cut from this and continue.

Thank you for reading :)

colourmeshocked July 1 2009, 04:30:40 UTC

Wha? WHAT? You ended it there?!

Oh god. You can't believe how much I wanted it to go on and on and on. Had such a fun time reading this. A little bummed out that Jon was straying away from Tom but the J/S B/R interactions made up for it. Loved this a lot &hearts

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:18:06 UTC

I know, I feel like I owe everyone who reads this a HUGE apology, in the outline, the last scene is actually the halfway point. I did not plan well at all in terms of time.

Thank you for reading and for letting me know what you thought :)

x_snowcone July 1 2009, 04:36:40 UTC

HAHAHA. Brendon is the best thing to happen since moccasins. True story.

WRITE MOREEE. You should definitely write more. :D

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:17:03 UTC

UGH, I know, I had so much more to say with this. :/

Thank you so much for reading :)

abraxas_life July 1 2009, 04:53:00 UTC

Omg, but... but... BRENDON!

I was WAITING FOR JON'S REVELATION! IT NEVER CAAAAAME!

I'm like, all off kilter now, I completely was not expecting it to end there.

alwayseven July 2 2009, 01:20:55 UTC

I'm so sorry, I totally failed in terms of writing a complete story, this is not at all the ending I had planned.

Poor Brendon :/

Thank you for reading :)

abraxas_life July 2 2009, 03:09:08 UTC

Oh goodness, no, don't be sorry! I just meant that I pretty much never wanted the story to end.
It's good that it stopped there, actually, because now the story can continue on to become GSF in my head, and I'll never have to know otherwise.

Poor, poor Brendon. :(

Thanks for writing!