Okay that got me... I shuddered when Naraku was groping Kagome... But what a way for Naraku to go! Too bad it wasn't that easy in RT's world.. giggles..
as i told faraway eyes below, it started out even darker, but i cut that stuff out and kept it light. if and when i do this for dreaming trees, i'll let it get squickily dark. as it was it was pretty squicky!
you mean 'no inu/nar' love scenes? no. i don't see doing that. dreaming trees requested a nar/kag NC-17. this one 'kindof' counts... but i do have something darker in mind, along the same theme. not sure it will really work tho. this one may have to do in fulfilling her request. we'll see.
Oh my. . .poor spider boyfarawayeyes4October 30 2006, 01:42:51 UTC
That was hilarious. Poor, poor Naraku. He just doesn't get all that much loving, I've noticed. I loved how it was going down this dark path where it looked like Naraku was going to get what he wanted and we could have had a much different story, but when she put the beads on him and Inuyasha stepped into the scene, it was just great. I could see the utter confusion on Naraku's face when she said sit and stay. And the sex in front of him? That was awesome. I honestly don't know if I could ever write a crack!fic of any kind and have it turn out so well.
heh. thank you. i must say that the first draft WAS very dark. lucky for all of us, i had to cut 150 words to fit it in the requisit 1031 characters so i decided to leave in the lighter stuff. i plan to do a darker version perhaps, someday, since that was dreaming_trees' request - and i KNOW she like's 'em dark. but i'm happy with how this came out. frankly, i don't know if i can do nar/kag any other way BUT crack!fic. we'll see i guess. glad you liked.
i've decided to stop hiding my crack!fic and post this and Zorro up on mm.org for all to see. might as well just fess up to my idiotic side. did you read zorro? wanna shot at even stupider crack!fic?
You know, Naraku wouldn't be so bad, if you kept him pre-transformation at Mt. Hakurai. He just got ugly after that and save his face, all the allure that I found he might have had disappeared. That eye or whatever it is in his chest---just not hot. Now when he pretended to be that lord, I thought, "you know, he's kinda sexy in his own way. . .if you like abuse, I guess."
I honestly can't say I see a Nar/Kag pairing that isn't either crack!fic or just plain dark and creepy, though, no matter how Naraku looks.
I'll certainly have to check more of your stuff out, crack!fic and otherwise. I should, though, get to work on my story---before my readers decide to lynch me.
This is true... seeing as Naraku wants to get rid of all emotional desires and just be powerful and all demon..
I won't lynch you at all... Though I do need a schedule BIG time... I need to have it where I review this writer this day, that writer the next day etc.. I hate not being able to review and having other feeling all left out.. and if the writer doesn't have a new chapter up I can sketch.. or something..
yeah. i couldn't bring myself to do tentacle sex. i don't really find it that sexy myself, so this worked out for me. i'm not sure he'd have described himself as an inu/kag shipper exactly... but it's fun to think of him that way!
yeah. i thought we should just wrap this one up. saves the temptation to do a sequel (gah! not that!)
glad you liked it. yeah. i may stop at this, or i may go with another - darker - idea that nibbles sometimes.
yeah. i'm thinking x-rated crac!fic might qualify to push the envelope on ff.net. you're right. there's plenty of it out there, ijust try to play by the rules and not post the stuff that's blatently obvious (eg, Park)
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yeah. if only RT were so brave!
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i've decided to stop hiding my crack!fic and post this and Zorro up on mm.org for all to see. might as well just fess up to my idiotic side. did you read zorro? wanna shot at even stupider crack!fic?
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I honestly can't say I see a Nar/Kag pairing that isn't either crack!fic or just plain dark and creepy, though, no matter how Naraku looks.
I'll certainly have to check more of your stuff out, crack!fic and otherwise. I should, though, get to work on my story---before my readers decide to lynch me.
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I won't lynch you at all... Though I do need a schedule BIG time... I need to have it where I review this writer this day, that writer the next day etc.. I hate not being able to review and having other feeling all left out.. and if the writer doesn't have a new chapter up I can sketch.. or something..
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Then it turns out he's an Inu/Kag shipper, who knew?
I liked the beads. I guess it would have been asking for trouble to just leave Naraku stuck for eternity?
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yeah. i thought we should just wrap this one up. saves the temptation to do a sequel (gah! not that!)
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what think?
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yeah. i'm thinking x-rated crac!fic might qualify to push the envelope on ff.net. you're right. there's plenty of it out there, ijust try to play by the rules and not post the stuff that's blatently obvious (eg, Park)
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