Comments | alterego_lab: This Is How We Say Goodbye In Mexico

kitty69lover in alterego_lab

This Is How We Say Goodbye In Mexico - HITTER

Sep 07, 2010 22:50

Author: kitty69lover
Rating: PG-13.
Category: drama
Characters: Jonathan Dos Santos / Rafael Marquez
Length: hitter
Summary: Rafa is leaving, and Jonathan must do something about it
Disclaimer: initially only in my head; too much to contain it all, so it spilled on the webpage....
Authors Notes:this is the prize for calypso_63 who correctly guessed a little ( Read more... )

rafael marquez, rating: non-explicit, slash, type: drama, fic: hitter, paraphrasing is my life, fc barcelona, jonathan dos santos

Comments 7

butbyskylight September 7 2010, 20:23:51 UTC

...guh.
*grapples for words*
This hurts. Poor Jona :( Silly Rafa! How could he have been so blind!!?

Loved this <3

kitty69lover September 7 2010, 20:39:58 UTC

yeah, i'm sorry i'm obviously transferring my depression in my stories :( and i never dealt with Rafa leaving.

i keep writing goodbye fics lately.

yeah, Rafa had the boy wonder under his eye for so long and never saw anything. :( such is life/love.

thanks for the comment :-)))

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kitty69lover September 8 2010, 05:51:13 UTC

ahaha, i call that ~poetic license xDD.

to be frank, i never thought of them as a couple either, but i was writing this for my friend who likes them both so i had to improvise. i'm glad it seems to be ok lol.

and i know, right?? Jona SURELY didn't need that sort of pep talk lol, not when he was imagining Rafa had other things to tel him lol.

i agree there are some footballers that simply cannot be slashed, but we can try lol.

thanks for the comment :-)))

lullaby9 September 8 2010, 07:25:46 UTC

Awww I have always(?) prefer Rafa/Chicharito :3 sexy and cute but now you have show me this new world(?) LOL and aww I think I qt like it more<3 but still don't know e_e, anyways Jona was so lovely *melts* in here, my sweetheart he will be back to you :)

kitty69lover September 8 2010, 07:46:51 UTC

oh Rafa/Chicarito go together much better, but i had to have Jona in it, since i wrote it for a friend haha.

but i'm glad you liked these two :-)) and poor Jona, misunderstood till the very end :-( maybe they'll be together someday ;-))

thanks for the comment :-)))

calypso_63 September 9 2010, 08:20:44 UTC

Ohhhh, thank you so much! I think this is the first time anyone actually wrote something for *me* particularly, and I adored it :) and I’m so glad you did it with my Rafita and bb Jona!! You know how much I adore them, although even I never thought of them as a slash couple - then again, I am new to slash so it figures ( ... )

kitty69lover September 9 2010, 09:10:07 UTC

i'm really glad you liked it ;-)) i wanted to use both of these fine boys, since you love them so much :D

tbh, they're not really a slash couple, i just made them up as one lol, but i think it kinda works eheh. i'm so glad you're understanding on my new slash inclined writing. it seems that i cannot write het the way i used to. time to move on, at least partly.

I think the ending is quite ambiguous, because maybe INDEED, there was something more to Rafa's goodbye speech. the man maybe just needed his time to get to the point. and he DID respond to the kiss lol.

urgh, Fabrique. lol, i wouldn't wish that on any slash couple lol.

thanks for the comment and superglad you liked it :-*