Seein, Chapter 7

Apr 20, 2011 17:42


Title: Seeing
Pairing: Demi/Selena,
Rating: M
Summary: Sometimes you need more your than eyes in order to see what's in front of you.
Disclaimer: Nope. Still don't own Demi or Selena. So...yeah.

Chapter 7

AN: I was thinking of starting a new fic after getting some advice from a fellow fic writer. After giving me a few pointers and what not, I was ( Read more... )

seeing, femslash, selena gomez, demi lovato, demi/selena

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th3who April 20 2011, 23:03:36 UTC
Oh no she didn't!

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alphateam101 April 20 2011, 23:23:43 UTC
oh yes she did girlfriend. She brought it, stuffed it in a turkey, and served it to us with string beans. -snap snap- lol

-Alpha

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whurmy April 21 2011, 00:40:22 UTC
FFFFUUUUUUUUUU----

Anyways. OMFG DIANA YOU BITCH. She's so judgmental. And prejudice. Which is pretty much judgmental. But whatever.

Dallas and Eddie, man. I was like YEAUUUH GO LOVATOS. :D I love that they love Diana, but they know she's being ridiculous. They don't just blindly follow Mama Bear because she's a boss. B) But really. I just. <3

Maddie is the cutest kid ever. Ugh. (:

And Demi. You cutie. Their relationship is the most adorable thing on the planet earth. Demi just *touches* Selena and it's like she's setting the planets back in alignment and everything is right in the universe again.

Hopefully Selena has that effect on Demi during this dinner with JOSEPH FREAKING JONAS. (Eww.)

Diana, you bitch.

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alphateam101 April 22 2011, 02:10:19 UTC
Oh I think you might be surprised with what will happen. But I think you'll like what I have to offer. Hopefully lol.

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ellaayyx3 April 21 2011, 01:23:27 UTC
I love how you described how Demi 'saw' the world. Instead of the normal driving in traffic scene, you made it so much more creative. It also expressed how much music meant to Demi because of her disability. <3

Oh and Joe, go away. No one likes you. Well, no one except Diana. -__-

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alphateam101 April 22 2011, 02:11:18 UTC
That was exactly what I was going for. And I am so glad you saw it :). Because of her disability, she "sees" the world through the only way she knows how. Thank you for picking up on that :)

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thefantasmickah April 21 2011, 04:52:07 UTC
Okay, I should totally leave an awesome comment to go with this awesome update but I'm having issues focusing at the moment so I'll do the best I can.

Love all the talking about life if it were a musical. I once had an epic conversation with a stranger over at omegle about that. And I love all the Repo references and Phantom. So much love for both of them.

And of course Diana would invite Joe. I had almost managed to put him from my mind and then there he comes, back into the picture like the unwanted rash.

And I love how Selena can win them over just by being her and then Diana is all mama bear. And I get why she is, but I definitely think that she needs to get a clue.

And I can't wait for moreeeee.

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alphateam101 April 22 2011, 02:13:29 UTC
"And I love all the Repo references and Phantom. So much love for both of them."

I know right?! Lol Two of my favorite musicals of all time. Especially Repo. One of the most intense and original Rock Opera's I have seen. But with Joe...well you just gotta wait to see what's gonna happen with him ;-)

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perhapsds April 21 2011, 05:05:28 UTC
I'm sooo loking forward to the next chapter! It's gonna be epic!

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alphateam101 April 22 2011, 02:13:53 UTC
Damn I got some high expectations to live up to now. Hope I can deliver ;-)

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