Seein, Chapter 7

[alphateam101]

Title: Seeing
Pairing: Demi/Selena,
Rating: M
Summary: Sometimes you need more your than eyes in order to see what's in front of you.
Disclaimer: Nope. Still don't own Demi or Selena. So...yeah.

Chapter 7

AN: I was thinking of starting a new fic after getting some advice from a fellow fic writer. After giving me a few pointers and what not, I was

Comments

[lolomgwhut]

Nice, I especially liked the beginning. :)

[alphateam101]

Thank you!! Lol I actually took your advice as I said in my an and tried to keep the povs consistent in the characters respective scene. I kinda felt tempted to go back and forth a little but in the end I think I improved in this one. I gotta thank you for that. You helped me a ton lol

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[khyron00]

This story is so awesome! Sorry it took me so long to review but well, u know the story haha.
Anyway, I`'m really enjoying this, I love the way u make Demi being so positive after her accident left her blind. I'm sure it's the way she would react, after the normal mourning period she would bounce back and she would find a way to make good on her situation.
I can totally feel for poor Selly, after her accident it was so bad for her, but at least she's opening up to Demi and that will help her.
I hope Dal gets more screen time cos I love Dal hahaha. I don't love Mama Bear Dianna, though, I think she's a big meanie and she makes me cry.
But why, o why did u had to involve the soulsucking joe? I hate him already!!!!
I love this story sooooo much!!!1

[semi_freak]

Joe? ... dislike mama bear dislike