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Fic: Changeling

Feb 25, 2010 11:28

He foggily experienced a bizarre set of moments as he drifted in and out of consciousness. One of them involved Phyllis’s face inches from his, so close he yelled. It asked him what happened? Could he hear her? Should she call an ambulance? And he found he couldn’t do much more than groan about how loud it spoke and close his eyes ( Read more... )

fic: life on mars (uk), part two, changeling

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mellaithwen February 25 2010, 16:47:35 UTC

oh sam! oh gene!!!

and can I just say I love that you spell it faeries :):) I do too. and always end up getting corrected, grrr.

how very wonderful, can't wait until the next part my dear :)

alone_dreaming February 25 2010, 17:08:23 UTC

Fancy seeing you here! :)! How are you doing?? How's school? How did your Doyle Test go? AH! :) *hug*

Well, yet again our paths cross in fandom, right? :) Heh.

Yes, actually, I would typically spell it "fairies" in this fandom but "faerie" strikes me as more mythical and related to the idea of "changeling" so I spelled it that way instead. :D Yay! In normal, every day stuff, I've always spelled it faeries. :) I like it that way. *shall not correct you*

And the next part will be up on Saturday. :) So glad to see you again!

mellaithwen February 25 2010, 18:29:31 UTC

lol I saw you post on lifein1973 and was like :O *add as friend* but genius that I am said nothing :P I'm good thanks, how are you? I didn't realise you had an ejay!! doyle exam went okay, we're meant to have the results today but they're not up lol

I like faeries due to the book by Alan Lee and Brian Froud being spelt as such lol.

saturday!! :D yaaay.

talkingtothesky February 25 2010, 19:01:04 UTC

Ahhhhh! D: This is so sad, but so good. Fix him soon, please? ♥

alone_dreaming February 25 2010, 19:51:06 UTC

No worries, he's been fixed. :) And I'll prove it. On Saturday. :)

mountland February 25 2010, 19:20:53 UTC

This is brillaint ( ... )

alone_dreaming February 25 2010, 20:04:59 UTC

Only mostly dead? ;) Which means it must be partially alive. No worries, you are more than forgiven! *blushes* I haven't commented on how AMAZING your HP/Life on Mars story is so we're more than square.

And *much blushing* thank you, thank you, thank you for the compliments. It's quite possibly one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten from anyone. I was actually concerned about that last bit-- it felt less fluid than I would've liked but to hear that it WORKED (even in present tense, silly present tense) makes my day. *bows to* Thank you, thank you, thank you. *blush blush blush*

Feel free to babble anytime. I rather liked your babbling! In fact, it was very well organized in comparison to my babbling (which consists of a lot of squealing and whining and hand clapping)and incredibly complimentary.

Babbling now actually. Really, thank you. *blush*

mountland February 25 2010, 20:49:52 UTC

It was comatose due to neglect (26 viruses and spyware *hangs head in shame*)wow you know what I have written *starts blushing too ( ... )

alone_dreaming February 26 2010, 00:05:16 UTC

Ouch. Fixed, though? And free of the evil bugs? *shifty eyes* Tina, my computer, so named after the llama from Napoleon Dynamite (don't ask), had a similar problem not too long ago. I handed her over to my best friend's dad (he's a computer something or another) and he informed me Tina had computer Alzheimer's due to an overload of spyware and viruses. :( Poor Tina. She got a new brain ( ... )

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archraven1234 February 25 2010, 23:09:19 UTC

I love you! Yet another beautifully done piece! Your plot was so delicately composed - now that’s originality!
Poor Sam, getting hurt twice in a day - but I am sadistic enough to love that! Sam getting shot, and Gene’s reaction to it was heartbreaking - I like how you’ve done it so that Gene only shows that he truly cares for Sam when Sam’s at death’s door. Oh, Gene.
Please don’t let Sam die! I already feel like crying everytime I listen to ferntree’s audio fic!

alone_dreaming February 26 2010, 00:11:59 UTC

*tail wag* I can has a biscuit?

:( Yeah, Sam does get the brunt of the beatings it seems. And I can't see Gene breaking down unless he really thinks Sam's dying. We all know that ambulances back then weren't reliable or fast, AND listening to the dialog, I had to have a reason for Gene really, REALLY, freaking out.

Deadly chest wound is good!

:D I don't write death fics. As an assurance. :) And more will be up on Saturday. :)

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alone_dreaming February 27 2010, 18:57:35 UTC

:) Thank you, thank you. I am so glad you listened to the audio fic. :) It's fantastic, right?

Next chapter up as soon as I read through it again.