Fic: Changeling

Feb 25, 2010 11:28

                He foggily experienced a bizarre set of moments as he drifted in and out of consciousness. One of them involved Phyllis’s face inches from his, so close he yelled. It asked him what happened? Could he hear her? Should she call an ambulance? And he found he couldn’t do much more than groan about how loud it spoke and close his eyes ( Read more... )

fic: life on mars (uk), part two, changeling

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mountland February 25 2010, 19:20:53 UTC
This is brillaint ( ... )

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alone_dreaming February 25 2010, 20:04:59 UTC
Only mostly dead? ;) Which means it must be partially alive. No worries, you are more than forgiven! *blushes* I haven't commented on how AMAZING your HP/Life on Mars story is so we're more than square.

And *much blushing* thank you, thank you, thank you for the compliments. It's quite possibly one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten from anyone. I was actually concerned about that last bit-- it felt less fluid than I would've liked but to hear that it WORKED (even in present tense, silly present tense) makes my day. *bows to* Thank you, thank you, thank you. *blush blush blush*

Feel free to babble anytime. I rather liked your babbling! In fact, it was very well organized in comparison to my babbling (which consists of a lot of squealing and whining and hand clapping)and incredibly complimentary.

Babbling now actually. Really, thank you. *blush*

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mountland February 25 2010, 20:49:52 UTC
It was comatose due to neglect (26 viruses and spyware *hangs head in shame*)wow you know what I have written *starts blushing too ( ... )

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alone_dreaming February 26 2010, 00:05:16 UTC
Ouch. Fixed, though? And free of the evil bugs? *shifty eyes* Tina, my computer, so named after the llama from Napoleon Dynamite (don't ask), had a similar problem not too long ago. I handed her over to my best friend's dad (he's a computer something or another) and he informed me Tina had computer Alzheimer's due to an overload of spyware and viruses. :( Poor Tina. She got a new brain ( ... )

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mountland February 26 2010, 23:13:12 UTC
Yes all is well now! Ha love the name Tina for a laptop, mines called Wooster

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alone_dreaming February 27 2010, 19:30:55 UTC
:D Wooster's an adorable name. Like Jeeves and Wooster? :D *loves that show* Heh. Yeah, from what I understood the hard drive was suffering slow, debilitating memory loss. And I agree about the humans part-- go scientific research! MAKE PEOPLE NEW BRAINS ( ... )

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mountland February 27 2010, 20:21:46 UTC
Yes, so that when I go on askjeeves.com I can go look it’s Jeeves and Wooster (small things amuse small minds ( ... )

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