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Therapy Required (1/?)

Nov 06, 2011 10:54

Title: Therapy Required
Author: Alex aka alltimelow09876
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Lex Barakat & Alex Gaskarth
POV: Lex
Disclaimer: I don't own these boys.
This story is fake.
A/N This is my first story please be nice.

( Off To A Bad Start )

all time low

Comments 2

turnthepageover November 6 2011, 18:29:08 UTC

I started reading the fourth one first, because I'm stupid like that ;) hahaha.
And then halfway through I was like, "Wait, this is part four. Damnit."
I think it's really good. It flows nicely and it sounds awesome.
The only thing that I would say is that you need to put quotation marks, 'cause it's a little difficult to know whether they're speaking or not.
Now I'm gonna go read part two :) hahah.

alltimelow09876 November 6 2011, 18:35:30 UTC

Yeah, I didn't think about the "" thing my computer usually does it for me, and thanks! I'm glad someone likes it!